6/19/2016 c16 18Melancholic-Lotus13
That was Awesome! It was so intense that it was just some thing I couldn't put down
That was Awesome! It was so intense that it was just some thing I couldn't put down
11/5/2015 c16 Nick
HOLY. SH**. THAT. WAS. AWESOME! But I do feel that you rushed the end a bit I feel that Hiccup should of address some more of the Vikings maybe Astrid got to say sorry to and have Stoic have a longer conversation but I also feel that you got the mood right at the end I see way too many main characters f**k over and then instantly forgive, you at least had him angry for a little bit of time and that's why I give two thumbs up to this fic I do hope you come back to re-write the ending just a little bit but all an all keep up the good work.
HOLY. SH**. THAT. WAS. AWESOME! But I do feel that you rushed the end a bit I feel that Hiccup should of address some more of the Vikings maybe Astrid got to say sorry to and have Stoic have a longer conversation but I also feel that you got the mood right at the end I see way too many main characters f**k over and then instantly forgive, you at least had him angry for a little bit of time and that's why I give two thumbs up to this fic I do hope you come back to re-write the ending just a little bit but all an all keep up the good work.
6/5/2015 c16 a random person
Great ending! Sorry this is so late! I greatly enjoyed this story and am looking forward to your next one.
Great ending! Sorry this is so late! I greatly enjoyed this story and am looking forward to your next one.
6/4/2015 c16 pipi96
one more chapter please ONE MORE CHAPTER PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE
I WANT TO SEE WHAT WILL THE WHAT WILL THE VIKING DO TO ASK HICCUP FORGIVENESS AND ASTRID NEED TO KISS HICCUP
PLEASE
one more chapter please ONE MORE CHAPTER PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE
I WANT TO SEE WHAT WILL THE WHAT WILL THE VIKING DO TO ASK HICCUP FORGIVENESS AND ASTRID NEED TO KISS HICCUP
PLEASE
6/4/2015 c16 7Charminghex99
If you are going to make this a series of movies, maybe when your done you could have an epilogue where all your characters meet.
If you are going to make this a series of movies, maybe when your done you could have an epilogue where all your characters meet.
6/3/2015 c15 6JacksonPotterCullen
I meant good not gone. I hate auto correct. It is the bane of my exsistance. I swear it's out to get me!
I meant good not gone. I hate auto correct. It is the bane of my exsistance. I swear it's out to get me!
6/3/2015 c16 JacksonPotterCullen
This really was an amazing story! I'm sad to see it end. I had done a little happy dance when I got the alert saying that this story had been updated. Can't wait to see your next story! I'm sure it'll been just as gone as this one!
This really was an amazing story! I'm sad to see it end. I had done a little happy dance when I got the alert saying that this story had been updated. Can't wait to see your next story! I'm sure it'll been just as gone as this one!
4/29/2015 c15 a random person
Yah, what to do... don't worry, inspiration will come eventually.
Yah, what to do... don't worry, inspiration will come eventually.
4/15/2015 c15 3ladipretender
...I honestly don't know what to say right now-At the moment I admit that I am quite confused...But that might simply because you're referencing things that you haven't explained yet, maybe? (Like the whole Hiccup's daemonic appearance, or the fact that he was you-know-what...) Other than that, and the fact that the chapter was quite short, I was happy to have something to progress the story. Other than that, what ideas were you in need of? (PM me if you need anything ;) )
...I honestly don't know what to say right now-At the moment I admit that I am quite confused...But that might simply because you're referencing things that you haven't explained yet, maybe? (Like the whole Hiccup's daemonic appearance, or the fact that he was you-know-what...) Other than that, and the fact that the chapter was quite short, I was happy to have something to progress the story. Other than that, what ideas were you in need of? (PM me if you need anything ;) )
4/8/2015 c14 Death Fury
Good chapter isn'tthe next the battle scene? if show could you add some extra twists? one more thing is the second fanfiction you write is it HTTYD2?
Good chapter isn'tthe next the battle scene? if show could you add some extra twists? one more thing is the second fanfiction you write is it HTTYD2?