for Changing the Way They Saw Him3/15/2015 c10 
3ladipretender
Yes, you really are horrible...And...Despite the fact that I'm equal parts anticipation and terror right now over what you just set up...I STILL want more xD Guess I'm just a lost cause. A thoroughly lost one. Though...if it's the full moon...And SHE mentioned the new moon, I still have to have hope that you'll find a way to get him out of this...Or else I'M gonna end up turning into a daemon. Because, unless it's my imagination, Hiccup's sprites, at least, seem to be less dark and more playful as the story goes along, which makes me wonder if something about his friendship with Toothless isn't going to be the turning point? (see now I'm rambling and grasping at straws-because the thought that he might have to do that for his best friend makes me wanna seriously cry. (and the fact you threw that other little, extremely vague, creepy fact in there only makes the sensation multiply by at least 300%)) Gahhhh, I think the anticipation is going to win the battle and make me a nervous wreck until you update...at which point, if your comment is anything to go by, I'm likely to implode...
3ladipretenderYes, you really are horrible...And...Despite the fact that I'm equal parts anticipation and terror right now over what you just set up...I STILL want more xD Guess I'm just a lost cause. A thoroughly lost one. Though...if it's the full moon...And SHE mentioned the new moon, I still have to have hope that you'll find a way to get him out of this...Or else I'M gonna end up turning into a daemon. Because, unless it's my imagination, Hiccup's sprites, at least, seem to be less dark and more playful as the story goes along, which makes me wonder if something about his friendship with Toothless isn't going to be the turning point? (see now I'm rambling and grasping at straws-because the thought that he might have to do that for his best friend makes me wanna seriously cry. (and the fact you threw that other little, extremely vague, creepy fact in there only makes the sensation multiply by at least 300%)) Gahhhh, I think the anticipation is going to win the battle and make me a nervous wreck until you update...at which point, if your comment is anything to go by, I'm likely to implode...
3/14/2015 c9 a random person
Great chapter! So the sprites can control dragons too. Nice touch with the sprites being able to form into vikings. So you've got the ending planned, I'm sure it will be great :). I'm flattered that you like my idea.
Great chapter! So the sprites can control dragons too. Nice touch with the sprites being able to form into vikings. So you've got the ending planned, I'm sure it will be great :). I'm flattered that you like my idea.
3/14/2015 c9 ladipretender
*Is so not ashamed to admit that I've been stalking this story in hopes of an update* And what an update it was-Yes, you did actually clear up one of my questions, which I loved, but still left me wanting it to go on forever. (especially since I don't QUITE believe Z's line at the beginning, lol) And it all left me wondering who else in that room Hiccup is unaware of actually being a daemon. :D *though I really don't think I should be smiling right now, not when all I wanna do is give poor Hiccup a hug after what he just went through, but the "not quite..." line just made me want to giggle-especially since all the Vikings could hear her (which started even more questions bouncing around in my head, lol)* So many things I wish to say, but the words just won't come...And I know I will think of a ton of them in about an hour-when I can no longer post them (but I might just have to tell you some other way, rofl)
*Is so not ashamed to admit that I've been stalking this story in hopes of an update* And what an update it was-Yes, you did actually clear up one of my questions, which I loved, but still left me wanting it to go on forever. (especially since I don't QUITE believe Z's line at the beginning, lol) And it all left me wondering who else in that room Hiccup is unaware of actually being a daemon. :D *though I really don't think I should be smiling right now, not when all I wanna do is give poor Hiccup a hug after what he just went through, but the "not quite..." line just made me want to giggle-especially since all the Vikings could hear her (which started even more questions bouncing around in my head, lol)* So many things I wish to say, but the words just won't come...And I know I will think of a ton of them in about an hour-when I can no longer post them (but I might just have to tell you some other way, rofl)
3/13/2015 c8 a random person
That was better. I'm not saying I like gore but this was pretty gory, nice job. Hmmm what if it turns out Tiandra is controlling or maybe even IS the queen/ Red death herself and is sending out the dragons to raid Berk to have Hiccup, "play" around with them, and for power.
That was better. I'm not saying I like gore but this was pretty gory, nice job. Hmmm what if it turns out Tiandra is controlling or maybe even IS the queen/ Red death herself and is sending out the dragons to raid Berk to have Hiccup, "play" around with them, and for power.
3/11/2015 c8 ladipretender
O.o Uh...yeah, you could say that you left me with still more questions-like a million unanswered inquiries attacking my brainpan...And majorly creepy vibes running down my spine (like a 23 on a scale of 1 to 10 xD (though I'm loving it, so what does that say about me?)) But yet...it all just left me wanting to know more-for starters, just what it was that Z was reacting so violently to; and onto just what HER game is (and NO, I am not going to type it out...still seriously shibering over here) and why in hel she's so determined to make Hiccup do that (another thing I won't type out I guess xP but mainly because I don't want to risk spoiling anything for people who read reviews before the chapters...) And finally...just who, or what, is going to attack... *that really isn't it all...like even remotely close...But I need to walk away before my head explodes now xD*
O.o Uh...yeah, you could say that you left me with still more questions-like a million unanswered inquiries attacking my brainpan...And majorly creepy vibes running down my spine (like a 23 on a scale of 1 to 10 xD (though I'm loving it, so what does that say about me?)) But yet...it all just left me wanting to know more-for starters, just what it was that Z was reacting so violently to; and onto just what HER game is (and NO, I am not going to type it out...still seriously shibering over here) and why in hel she's so determined to make Hiccup do that (another thing I won't type out I guess xP but mainly because I don't want to risk spoiling anything for people who read reviews before the chapters...) And finally...just who, or what, is going to attack... *that really isn't it all...like even remotely close...But I need to walk away before my head explodes now xD*
3/11/2015 c7 Guest
This is really good. What are Hiccup's conditions for breaking the deal? To become a hero? Can the daemon control dragons? Or do they repel them? Could toothless protect Hiccup, thus giving him an escape? Or does the release of negative feelings purge the daemons?
This is really good. What are Hiccup's conditions for breaking the deal? To become a hero? Can the daemon control dragons? Or do they repel them? Could toothless protect Hiccup, thus giving him an escape? Or does the release of negative feelings purge the daemons?
3/10/2015 c7 ladipretender
(WAY too much caffeine, apparently, since I hit the next button twice before I managed to go back and hit the post button on the last chapter) But-I finally figured it all out, and really enjoyed this chapter...even though it only left me with more questions and no real answers, lol. Seriously xD between the snippet between Hiccup and HER, and that last ominous line from Z, I am literally bouncing in my seat in anticipation...Though, that could be nothing more than a side effect from the amount of sugar that I have ingested xP Ah, who am I kidding, most of it is the adrenaline rush of wanting to know what happens next :)
(WAY too much caffeine, apparently, since I hit the next button twice before I managed to go back and hit the post button on the last chapter) But-I finally figured it all out, and really enjoyed this chapter...even though it only left me with more questions and no real answers, lol. Seriously xD between the snippet between Hiccup and HER, and that last ominous line from Z, I am literally bouncing in my seat in anticipation...Though, that could be nothing more than a side effect from the amount of sugar that I have ingested xP Ah, who am I kidding, most of it is the adrenaline rush of wanting to know what happens next :)
3/10/2015 c6 ladipretender
O.o 2 chapters for the price of 1! :D I was overjoyed to see the email telling me that you had updated, even if it was amost 11 hours late, lol. Anywho, I loved the fact that Hiccup threw the axe into the door after Stoick left...And the fact that he wasn't able to get it back out again the next morning after the sprites abandoned him. Stubborn much? (I actually have no idea if that is the case, or if they were trying to prove a point/etc, but figures that they'd show up after the danger has passed-thankfully nothing happened, or I can't imagine that SHE would be very happy...) And now it's onto the next chapter! *charges forward on too much caffeine*
O.o 2 chapters for the price of 1! :D I was overjoyed to see the email telling me that you had updated, even if it was amost 11 hours late, lol. Anywho, I loved the fact that Hiccup threw the axe into the door after Stoick left...And the fact that he wasn't able to get it back out again the next morning after the sprites abandoned him. Stubborn much? (I actually have no idea if that is the case, or if they were trying to prove a point/etc, but figures that they'd show up after the danger has passed-thankfully nothing happened, or I can't imagine that SHE would be very happy...) And now it's onto the next chapter! *charges forward on too much caffeine*
3/10/2015 c6 3luis.miguelsilveira.1
This story is going really well! I can't wait for the next chapter!
3luis.miguelsilveira.1This story is going really well! I can't wait for the next chapter!
3/10/2015 c6 59Death Fury
this is new I think this could go far. So are you going to add more "scenes" or are you going to do this style? thanks for the early update.
59Death Furythis is new I think this could go far. So are you going to add more "scenes" or are you going to do this style? thanks for the early update.
3/6/2015 c5 a random person
Oh good, Toothless won't go nuts. Their friendship should never be broken! I think you could have gone gorier, it wasn't bad at all, a bit gross though. So many scars. How long has she been don't this? I thought this chapter (talking about the gore, not the actually story. This chapter was great!) was okay, it could have been a lot gorier but then again I'm okay with worms and a few select bugs (ants under your clothes is no laughing matter) so I can handle a good amount if gore and dark stuff. I honestly don't really see what's so gross about them other than the slime, it's not that bad and I think it feels kind of cool. Any way I'm probably not the best person to ask about this kind of thing.
Oh good, Toothless won't go nuts. Their friendship should never be broken! I think you could have gone gorier, it wasn't bad at all, a bit gross though. So many scars. How long has she been don't this? I thought this chapter (talking about the gore, not the actually story. This chapter was great!) was okay, it could have been a lot gorier but then again I'm okay with worms and a few select bugs (ants under your clothes is no laughing matter) so I can handle a good amount if gore and dark stuff. I honestly don't really see what's so gross about them other than the slime, it's not that bad and I think it feels kind of cool. Any way I'm probably not the best person to ask about this kind of thing.
3/5/2015 c5 3ladipretender
Yes, I certainly see, by just the small hint that you gave us here, that there must be quite a lot to explain, but I really like the way that you have gone about it. After all, you aren't slipping it in so slowly that most readers won't catch on, but you aren't hitting us over the head with it all at once either...I also like where you're adding in the extra scenes-after all, I always wondered what might have happened between Hiccup's collapse in the forest until he crept into his house late that night (because he probably wasn't unconscious that entire time.) It has a nice flow to it, the pace is good, and I haven't noticed any major errors so far (I especially appreciate that your character reactions aren't OOC) but I will be sure to bring it up if I do. Also, I personally don't think that the gore was that bad, so I'm fairly sure you're well within the safe range for the rating system. *with that, wanders off pondering about sprites, daemons, and how in Odin's name Hiccup is going to get out of this*
3ladipretenderYes, I certainly see, by just the small hint that you gave us here, that there must be quite a lot to explain, but I really like the way that you have gone about it. After all, you aren't slipping it in so slowly that most readers won't catch on, but you aren't hitting us over the head with it all at once either...I also like where you're adding in the extra scenes-after all, I always wondered what might have happened between Hiccup's collapse in the forest until he crept into his house late that night (because he probably wasn't unconscious that entire time.) It has a nice flow to it, the pace is good, and I haven't noticed any major errors so far (I especially appreciate that your character reactions aren't OOC) but I will be sure to bring it up if I do. Also, I personally don't think that the gore was that bad, so I'm fairly sure you're well within the safe range for the rating system. *with that, wanders off pondering about sprites, daemons, and how in Odin's name Hiccup is going to get out of this*
3/4/2015 c1 papaye2010
Wow! this is a great idea to make them belive that Hiccup is dead. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Wow! this is a great idea to make them belive that Hiccup is dead. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
3/3/2015 c4 a random person
Gore next chapter, did Toothless do a lot worst than roar or is it because of HER? I look forward to hearing who SHE is.
Gore next chapter, did Toothless do a lot worst than roar or is it because of HER? I look forward to hearing who SHE is.