for If Ducklings Stop to Smell the Roses4/5/2015 c6 Bakerstreet Blues
I forgot to mention in 7's review that you probably should change the rating to M for this one...
I forgot to mention in 7's review that you probably should change the rating to M for this one...
4/5/2015 c7 Bakerstreet Blues
Nice. Kinda sucks don't it Wilson you have your own thoughts thrown back at ya...hahaha
Love where this is going.
Nice. Kinda sucks don't it Wilson you have your own thoughts thrown back at ya...hahaha
Love where this is going.
4/5/2015 c5 Bakerstreet Blues
Gotta love Wilson's unique ability to be completely BLIND when it comes to women...Ha. Personally, I would slither to the bathroom and slit my throat with a plastic bic razor if I ever woke up next to HIM...ugh.
Dig the writing...nice job.
BSB
Gotta love Wilson's unique ability to be completely BLIND when it comes to women...Ha. Personally, I would slither to the bathroom and slit my throat with a plastic bic razor if I ever woke up next to HIM...ugh.
Dig the writing...nice job.
BSB
4/5/2015 c7 Guest
Cute, liking this story a lot, but Wilson's a bit of a jerk here. Why shouldn't she choose House?
Cute, liking this story a lot, but Wilson's a bit of a jerk here. Why shouldn't she choose House?
4/4/2015 c4 Bakerstreet Blues
Nice.
Definitely prefer this writing style...gives the reader the opportunity to 'think'. It gets boring always being 'told' who is saying what. I like to figure it out myself. Of course the character development has to be there in the first place so we have a fighting chance at figuring out who's talking...ha.
Keep writing.
BSB
Nice.
Definitely prefer this writing style...gives the reader the opportunity to 'think'. It gets boring always being 'told' who is saying what. I like to figure it out myself. Of course the character development has to be there in the first place so we have a fighting chance at figuring out who's talking...ha.
Keep writing.
BSB
4/3/2015 c2 Bakerstreet Blues
It seems that you need LOTS more reviews.
So I'll start. Great start. Yeah House 'warmed up' pretty quick, but she did play along with his game and she proved that she isn't an IDIOT...definitely 2 marks in her favor...
Keep writing, I already dig Rose.
BSB
It seems that you need LOTS more reviews.
So I'll start. Great start. Yeah House 'warmed up' pretty quick, but she did play along with his game and she proved that she isn't an IDIOT...definitely 2 marks in her favor...
Keep writing, I already dig Rose.
BSB
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