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1/2/2017 c1 6Vivstar
Haha. I'd love to see a second part. This is great.
I can't recall Julien ever calling Mort a "tody", though. Is that a typo, I wonder?
3/1/2015 c1 newspatt2200
Whose footsteps were approaching?

Anyway, I noticed a few minor spelling errors. And I was expecting Karl to be annoyed so much by Mort that he would abandon his asking Mort to join him and just leave. But, the ending was okay. And so was the story.

Keep up the good job and please, make more fanfics about Karl. :)

RC

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