for Ave Paternum Deo11/19/2024 c13 Evelinhaimo1
This is excellent storytelling. Enjoyable story with interesting characters, You have a talent and you're using it right. I liked the character of Optimus he has depth in him As an artist, I want to make the character art of Optimus in a good price. If you're interested feel free to reach me on my social accounts which is in my bio
This is excellent storytelling. Enjoyable story with interesting characters, You have a talent and you're using it right. I liked the character of Optimus he has depth in him As an artist, I want to make the character art of Optimus in a good price. If you're interested feel free to reach me on my social accounts which is in my bio
4/29/2019 c8 
20Spiritstrike
Yes, yes, very good chapter. Lots of action, lots of interesting creatures, more Blood-Eye and now newcomer Moonfang! Whooooo! I love it!
20SpiritstrikeYes, yes, very good chapter. Lots of action, lots of interesting creatures, more Blood-Eye and now newcomer Moonfang! Whooooo! I love it!
4/22/2019 c8 Angel.01Phoenix
Thank you so much for updating after so long. I hope you update the next chapter as soon as possible. And as always, I am ridiculously enraptured by this story because of how perfect it is. I hope the next chapter has more moments with Optimus and Eva.
Thank you so much for updating after so long. I hope you update the next chapter as soon as possible. And as always, I am ridiculously enraptured by this story because of how perfect it is. I hope the next chapter has more moments with Optimus and Eva.
1/2/2018 c7 Angel.01Phoenix
This...is...one...of...the...
GREATEST and the most PERFECT fan fiction of all the Transformers franchise EVER.
And I beg you, to update this beautiful piece of writing, as soon as possible. PLEASE.
You are a master of writing, which is why I thank you for reading this review and for writing this phenomenal piece of writing, not just for you to read and write , but for all of your readers who are reading this right now.
This...is...one...of...the...
GREATEST and the most PERFECT fan fiction of all the Transformers franchise EVER.
And I beg you, to update this beautiful piece of writing, as soon as possible. PLEASE.
You are a master of writing, which is why I thank you for reading this review and for writing this phenomenal piece of writing, not just for you to read and write , but for all of your readers who are reading this right now.
1/9/2017 c7 Spiritstrike
Whooo! That was fun to read, but it was very sad to hear that Norah, Kay'ah, and Ninin had died... very sad and very unfortunate for the clan. At least Ryssa and her mounts have joined them, that should better suffice to their survival. She'll come in handy in the future, I just know it.
I wonder how Blood-Eye is coming along. XDD Can't wait for more sis, good job!
Whooo! That was fun to read, but it was very sad to hear that Norah, Kay'ah, and Ninin had died... very sad and very unfortunate for the clan. At least Ryssa and her mounts have joined them, that should better suffice to their survival. She'll come in handy in the future, I just know it.
I wonder how Blood-Eye is coming along. XDD Can't wait for more sis, good job!
10/17/2015 c6 Spiritstrike
ACK! Curse you and your evil cliffhangers! NOPE NOPE!
Seriously, this chapter was really good! Sorry I didn't review sooner, but you know, shit happened and I got distracted. It was nice meeting Ryssa and knowing she was on their side. Her Rorak was really cool! Wolf-bear grr! XD I can see the chance that it was based off the Tokotas on DeviantArt, which is really cool.
Also, that snake? Totally from The Good Dinosaur! I saw what you did there, woman!
Blood-Eye is so fucking awesome! Now I really cannot wait to see his new follower when she does appear. Tehehehe!
Good job sis! I look forward to more! Hurry up and update again!
ACK! Curse you and your evil cliffhangers! NOPE NOPE!
Seriously, this chapter was really good! Sorry I didn't review sooner, but you know, shit happened and I got distracted. It was nice meeting Ryssa and knowing she was on their side. Her Rorak was really cool! Wolf-bear grr! XD I can see the chance that it was based off the Tokotas on DeviantArt, which is really cool.
Also, that snake? Totally from The Good Dinosaur! I saw what you did there, woman!
Blood-Eye is so fucking awesome! Now I really cannot wait to see his new follower when she does appear. Tehehehe!
Good job sis! I look forward to more! Hurry up and update again!
9/22/2015 c5 Spiritstrike
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!
The little surprise visitor just made me squeal VERY loudly! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!
I'm far too excited to say anything else! *flails and falls on the ground, squealing*
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!
The little surprise visitor just made me squeal VERY loudly! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!
I'm far too excited to say anything else! *flails and falls on the ground, squealing*
8/23/2015 c4 Spiritstrike
REVIEW TIME!
So the boy turned out to be from Morg's old clan? Damn that old man has a lot of shit in his life. At least he's back where he belongs where he will not cause much trouble for Optimus, though he seems to have loosened up after the encounter with Blood-Eye. And damn, going through the head of Blood-Eye was really cool! What a badass old bastard. Love him!
It's sad that Izi passed away into Erce's embrace, very sad, but at least Sen gave her a proper send off. I hope he gets accepted into the clan soon, he seems really like an awesome character. And it's really sweet that Optimus has adopted Tinni as his own. Nawww. Thank god Optimus managed to protect her from that nasty Than'sha, mean cat thing it was. I think that was a really cool shout out to Avatar with Optimus being chased by it, really cool.
Wait, who is that boy? Is he from another clan? Huh. So many mysteries in this strangely changed world.
Excellent work, sis, I do not care for the mistakes or anything of the sort. It's very interestingly written. Well done! I cannot wait for more!
REVIEW TIME!
So the boy turned out to be from Morg's old clan? Damn that old man has a lot of shit in his life. At least he's back where he belongs where he will not cause much trouble for Optimus, though he seems to have loosened up after the encounter with Blood-Eye. And damn, going through the head of Blood-Eye was really cool! What a badass old bastard. Love him!
It's sad that Izi passed away into Erce's embrace, very sad, but at least Sen gave her a proper send off. I hope he gets accepted into the clan soon, he seems really like an awesome character. And it's really sweet that Optimus has adopted Tinni as his own. Nawww. Thank god Optimus managed to protect her from that nasty Than'sha, mean cat thing it was. I think that was a really cool shout out to Avatar with Optimus being chased by it, really cool.
Wait, who is that boy? Is he from another clan? Huh. So many mysteries in this strangely changed world.
Excellent work, sis, I do not care for the mistakes or anything of the sort. It's very interestingly written. Well done! I cannot wait for more!
6/22/2015 c3 NightSongDragon
This is quite an instructing story, plz continue.
This is quite an instructing story, plz continue.
6/19/2015 c3 Spiritstrike
THAT. WAS. FUCKING. AWESOME!
I dunno what else to say, sis, except I LOVED IT! Optimus fighting the shit out of Blood-Eye was AWESOME! Well done! I fucking love it!
THAT. WAS. FUCKING. AWESOME!
I dunno what else to say, sis, except I LOVED IT! Optimus fighting the shit out of Blood-Eye was AWESOME! Well done! I fucking love it!
3/26/2015 c2 Spiritstrike
Very good, sis. Even though I found it a little difficult to read in some parts, things made a lot of sense. You've done a good job in explaining the changed world and it deeply satisfies me that everything has a name. You describing the culture, the animals, the birds, even the plants. I especially loved the description on the Enwa'rara, absolutely beautiful.
I giggled when they reacted in the same way that swans do. Never go near them or they'll peck your eyeballs out. Wouldn't wanna mess with them during the mating season.
Wait, there's a law that Primes must not look upon a naked femme for fear they'd be tempted by... oh! Well that certainly is a bit uncomfortable. XD Still, it's funny that Optimus got embarrassed by seeing more naked women. He's gonna have a hard time fitting in if he keeps seeing them like that. Whoops!
I think the plant names were interesting, though I had trouble grasping their names because my tongue sucks at pronouncing them. Oh well.
I think I can understand Eva's fear of migrating, especially since if she gave birth, she'd end up slowing the group down or be left behind. It's cruel, definitely cruel, but they're running out of time. Summer is approaching and they cannot afford to wait any longer. Oh boy.
And I really need to say this, but Morg is a fucking douchebag. He needs to jump off a cliff! XD
Um, anyways, once again you did an excellent job! I cannot wait to see more!
Very good, sis. Even though I found it a little difficult to read in some parts, things made a lot of sense. You've done a good job in explaining the changed world and it deeply satisfies me that everything has a name. You describing the culture, the animals, the birds, even the plants. I especially loved the description on the Enwa'rara, absolutely beautiful.
I giggled when they reacted in the same way that swans do. Never go near them or they'll peck your eyeballs out. Wouldn't wanna mess with them during the mating season.
Wait, there's a law that Primes must not look upon a naked femme for fear they'd be tempted by... oh! Well that certainly is a bit uncomfortable. XD Still, it's funny that Optimus got embarrassed by seeing more naked women. He's gonna have a hard time fitting in if he keeps seeing them like that. Whoops!
I think the plant names were interesting, though I had trouble grasping their names because my tongue sucks at pronouncing them. Oh well.
I think I can understand Eva's fear of migrating, especially since if she gave birth, she'd end up slowing the group down or be left behind. It's cruel, definitely cruel, but they're running out of time. Summer is approaching and they cannot afford to wait any longer. Oh boy.
And I really need to say this, but Morg is a fucking douchebag. He needs to jump off a cliff! XD
Um, anyways, once again you did an excellent job! I cannot wait to see more!
3/1/2015 c1 Spiritstrike
Squeee! What an amazing birthday gift, sis! I absolutely loved it! The wait was totally worth the wait.
I've learned a lot by reading this story and it truly fascinates me that you can create a world where everything has changed for Optimus. Five hundred years is truly a long time for Earth, especially for a virus to take immediate effect on all life on the planet. I found Optimus being embarrassed about seeing Eva naked was really funny! But him being able to touch her belly was the cutest thing ever! Lucky and Frosty being added to the family is really awesome too! Rokans and Wes'nas are even more fun! Lucky and Frosty. What precious babies.
Again, thank you so much for the early birthday present, the wait was really worth it and I'm loving it very much. Consider this story an immediate hook up for me! Weeee!
Squeee! What an amazing birthday gift, sis! I absolutely loved it! The wait was totally worth the wait.
I've learned a lot by reading this story and it truly fascinates me that you can create a world where everything has changed for Optimus. Five hundred years is truly a long time for Earth, especially for a virus to take immediate effect on all life on the planet. I found Optimus being embarrassed about seeing Eva naked was really funny! But him being able to touch her belly was the cutest thing ever! Lucky and Frosty being added to the family is really awesome too! Rokans and Wes'nas are even more fun! Lucky and Frosty. What precious babies.
Again, thank you so much for the early birthday present, the wait was really worth it and I'm loving it very much. Consider this story an immediate hook up for me! Weeee!
3/1/2015 c1 53russianwinter013
Took me a few minutes to read, but this is very good! I like the different characters and species (the animals) in this, especially Lucky and Frosty! Very good, very good!
53russianwinter013Took me a few minutes to read, but this is very good! I like the different characters and species (the animals) in this, especially Lucky and Frosty! Very good, very good!