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1/24 c4 Hoperna D Suna
Hi !
I just wanted to tell you that I really liked your story although it was a little different with your OC (which is really cool). However, if you don't mind a constructive remark, I would like to share with you something that shocked me somewhat.
I find it odd if not disgusting in fact that Bailey abandons Sentinel for a game night. Asking him whether he would come or not is something I found revolting while reading ...
After all the 2 are in a relationship and unless I misunderstood the carcatère of your OC I find that she thinks little of her mech at such a tragic moment.
Hope you didn't take my review the wrong way, it's just that I couldn't help but tell you about it.
Until now I have deeply loved your story, your quotes and the way you write.
In any case, I can't wait to read more!
1/12/2018 c3 4westbryan011
Ha ha ha ha that’s funny calling Skywarp thundercracker Doritos
4/27/2017 c9 37nadillaandlaprasthefireandice
AMAZING AS ALWAYS!
3/16/2015 c9 4Bee4ever
Wonderful ending!
3/16/2015 c9 BlueStar19
More please.
3/16/2015 c9 43AutobotGuy710
Well sad to see this end but still a great ending! Well done!
3/15/2015 c8 4Bee4ever
Epic chappie!
3/15/2015 c8 BlueStar19
More please.
3/15/2015 c8 43AutobotGuy710
Great chapter, keep it up! Glad Unicron was stopped.
3/13/2015 c7 BlueStar19
I knew it. Optimus did come back. Now how will they stop Unicron? More please. Really great so far.
3/13/2015 c7 AutobotGuy710
Great chapter! Glad Optimus is back! Keep it up!
3/13/2015 c7 4Bee4ever
Yay! Optimus is back!
3/12/2015 c6 BlueStar19
Gasp, she's going to bring Optimus back to life. Nooooooooo! Ok maybe just to continue the story.
3/12/2015 c6 Bee4ever
The Fallen is finally dead! Woo hoo!
3/11/2015 c6 43AutobotGuy710
Great chapter yet again, keep it up!
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