
2/19 c5 Guest
Can you update please it’s such a good story
Can you update please it’s such a good story
1/27/2019 c5
1Nitrate55
Would be great if you continued this, it's very well written as well as a great concept. I'm sad to see that it hasn't been updated in so long

Would be great if you continued this, it's very well written as well as a great concept. I'm sad to see that it hasn't been updated in so long
4/23/2017 c5
29Gummybear1178
just found it an I love it please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update!

just found it an I love it please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update!
7/21/2016 c5 RG
Oh yeah! That's what I'm talking about.
Oh yeah! That's what I'm talking about.
5/20/2016 c5
9david.davies.5851
Well that has ruined things for Palpatine. Good. I wonder what will happen now.

Well that has ruined things for Palpatine. Good. I wonder what will happen now.
5/19/2016 c5
7McAwsome
Wonderful story! Nice plot and well written. Some of my favorite parts are the ' never deprive a sentient being of ice cream', ' if you're watching this, I quit' and the 'alright fine'. If I could give you one piece of advice, it would be to use (these) less. I find myself using them a lot, so I've started trying to use comas instead. ;) this is a great fic and I'll be watching for the next update. Also, I think it'd be cool to see Pooja and Ryloo's reaction to Ahsoka. I doubt they've ever seen a nonhuman before.

Wonderful story! Nice plot and well written. Some of my favorite parts are the ' never deprive a sentient being of ice cream', ' if you're watching this, I quit' and the 'alright fine'. If I could give you one piece of advice, it would be to use (these) less. I find myself using them a lot, so I've started trying to use comas instead. ;) this is a great fic and I'll be watching for the next update. Also, I think it'd be cool to see Pooja and Ryloo's reaction to Ahsoka. I doubt they've ever seen a nonhuman before.
5/13/2016 c4
37Brytte Mystere
Oh my, Anakin, what a way to go!
(Love this. Sorry, I'm not all that good at reviewing)

Oh my, Anakin, what a way to go!
(Love this. Sorry, I'm not all that good at reviewing)