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3/3/2015 c1 Guest
great update soon
3/3/2015 c1 Ahem. First
Solid start, though the cold open (while stylish) will leave neophytes of the series at a near complete loss. Might want to work in some brief descriptors to help them figure out which pieces go on the outside of the puzzle.

I also suggest committing to a regular update schedule soon, or communicating your intent to develop one in a note. I'm interested to see how this compares with "Lighting Up the Dark"; good luck, and fox speed to your Falco.
3/3/2015 c1 Someone or Other
Looking forward to reading this new story. Thanks!
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