
7/18/2017 c2 PlsLetMeSleeb
If you like, I'll beta. I'm extremely grammar-conscious.
Also, I absolutely LOVE this story. It captures M'Gann so well. And Conner, as well.
If you like, I'll beta. I'm extremely grammar-conscious.
Also, I absolutely LOVE this story. It captures M'Gann so well. And Conner, as well.
1/9/2017 c2 Guest
I love your story! In fact, it's one of my favorite supermartian fanfiction. I hope you'll update very soon :)
I love your story! In fact, it's one of my favorite supermartian fanfiction. I hope you'll update very soon :)
6/12/2016 c2 Eigomi
Really I like your history and the form in which you write it, and really me encantaria that you were continuing introducing new prominent figures.
Really I like your history and the form in which you write it, and really me encantaria that you were continuing introducing new prominent figures.
5/22/2016 c2 JockoRivera
This is by far my favorite AU Supermartin story. You mange to keep them in character despite them being regular people instead of their super hero selfs. I really hope that there is more. This story is really good. Have a awesome day.
This is by far my favorite AU Supermartin story. You mange to keep them in character despite them being regular people instead of their super hero selfs. I really hope that there is more. This story is really good. Have a awesome day.
3/18/2016 c2
26Connie1
Thank you! This story is amazing! I would apply for being the beta, but I'm not a native English speaker, so that would beat the purpose a little bit

Thank you! This story is amazing! I would apply for being the beta, but I'm not a native English speaker, so that would beat the purpose a little bit
8/6/2015 c1 Guest
I really really like it, make it a story please!
I really really like it, make it a story please!
6/10/2015 c1 KirijamaScion
Chances are slim now that you'll continue this since there's been nothing since March, but it's an interesting AU. I'd like to see where it goes.
Chances are slim now that you'll continue this since there's been nothing since March, but it's an interesting AU. I'd like to see where it goes.
3/9/2015 c1
20Kessy Rods
It would be great if you did a story out of this. Looks like a really good AU. :)
Anyway, this was lovely. Congrats.

It would be great if you did a story out of this. Looks like a really good AU. :)
Anyway, this was lovely. Congrats.
3/9/2015 c1 sonder this
This was just too cute; I nearly felt his embarrassment. I was looking for an AU!meeting between these two and BAM! right on the first page. I love how you incorporated his mother into this - at first, I was a bit iffy with the idea since parent meetings are usually some shade of angst but here, I was quite amused with their bantering. You revealed what his home-life was like, his relationship with his parents, but over on top, you kept it nice and light and straightforward - of course you can't be anything else but blunt with these two, ne?
Usually, I wouldn't say this since I like continuance but I think this is fine on its own as a one-shot. The whole premise of this story was to build up Conner's courage to finally talk with the girl and since you resolved that by the end... well, what's left? I guess the actual development of the relationship and such but I feel like in cases like this, the build-up and anticipation of the talk was the fun part. But since this is your story, maybe you have a lot more surprises up your sleeve so that's just my two pence.
This was just too cute; I nearly felt his embarrassment. I was looking for an AU!meeting between these two and BAM! right on the first page. I love how you incorporated his mother into this - at first, I was a bit iffy with the idea since parent meetings are usually some shade of angst but here, I was quite amused with their bantering. You revealed what his home-life was like, his relationship with his parents, but over on top, you kept it nice and light and straightforward - of course you can't be anything else but blunt with these two, ne?
Usually, I wouldn't say this since I like continuance but I think this is fine on its own as a one-shot. The whole premise of this story was to build up Conner's courage to finally talk with the girl and since you resolved that by the end... well, what's left? I guess the actual development of the relationship and such but I feel like in cases like this, the build-up and anticipation of the talk was the fun part. But since this is your story, maybe you have a lot more surprises up your sleeve so that's just my two pence.
3/3/2015 c1 Guest
Conner was adorable in this! I hope you continue!
Conner was adorable in this! I hope you continue!