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12/18/2016 c45 xxxevil cookiexxx
The How to train your dragon movies are by far my favorite movies ever. I absolutely loved hiccup and Astrid in this story, you did a great job with their characters. Also happy early Christmas and New Years as well :) I hope you have a good one.
11/20/2016 c44 1Pangur Ban1022
Still dislike Anna. She seems to have a real problem with empathy. Also, shouldn't she be worried about the possibility of accidentally cooking her baby? I mean, just because she has fire powers doesn't mean the baby does, too. Or is it fire resistant because its mother is? How does abnormal reproduction work? Are the babies born with powers? Or do they have to wait until adolescence to bloom like their parents did?
11/18/2016 c44 Guest
Hooraaaaayyy this was another brilliant chapter!
11/18/2016 c42 doomguard24
ha
11/18/2016 c44 13SharKohen
Aww, rhese two are really great friends. Nice cameo on the stabbingtons, and good adn clever way to weave in Rapunzel's thoughts about her surroundings while having the training montage. And what on earth could have happened to Pitch!
11/16/2016 c44 heartonfire
Ahhhhh Pitch noooooo! Now Punzie is gonna have to do something, and covers will be blown and people angry and chaos happen! And what if they kick out the ex valkeries out! What if someone dies! What if so done followed them to the safe house and they have to go on the run!
*takes a deep breath*
OK I'm done.
As always I loved this chapter; you always have something June/pected up your sleeve, and its quite refreshing. Thank you for the wonderful work you've done here, and for sharing it with us all :)
Until next time,
-heartonfire
11/15/2016 c44 zulka
Hope it wasn't my fault.
11/17/2016 c44 8OniNoKo
Rapunzel is starting to craaaack and soon all hell will break loose. Can't wait! :D

This chapter felt a lot more relaxed than the previous one - not so many issues to resolve, I guess. And it was refreshing to see some bonding going on and to get a more intimate glimpse at another ex-V who didn't get so much screen time until now.

Btw, I think you did a great job portraying Punzie. I know Anna kept on repeating she's a soldier, but I think Punzie really wants to let go of that side of herself and that was clearly reflected in her responses and behavior.

Anyway, really looking forward to the next update!
11/16/2016 c44 5Fantasy OH YEA
Oh come one just tell the ghosts that you are all abnormal come on it would be awesome. Just let them tell the Ghosts it would be super cool. Awesome fanfic I am loving it
11/16/2016 c44 HornedGoddess
Anna's carrots sound delicious. Makes me hungry. I love Anna, so wonderful.
Poor Pitch and Merida! I hope he's ok.
11/16/2016 c44 4Ghost Angel14
Dude, I gotta ask, is there gonna be some action soon?
No disrespect but the story seems to be getting a little slow
11/16/2016 c44 12snowfire12345
Ha! Anna's cravings could be hilarious sometimes. So Kozmotis? Who could have wounded jaded bastard? I was really hoping for a Hiccstrid chapter. But a Jelsa smut would always trump that.
11/16/2016 c44 50Jpbake
I could be wrong, I usually am with guessing what happens next with your stories. But I have a feeling that Rapunzel is going to expose her powers in front of everyone by healing Pitch. Once again I could be wrong but that's my guess.
Another great chapter, keep up the great work.
11/16/2016 c44 Waguneru
Another great success, even when you have crisis of confidence/belief you can still do magic. Let me tell you, that you are wrong mate. Wrong because you were right when you try to make us get our own opinions of how the story will develope as the characters too (specially with this one). I think i owe you an apology because such as Oninoko dont undestand why you set the characters like this and it would be a shame if you tried to give us the plot more light as if you were feeding a baby or an old man.

Until now, i have made my own conconclusions and maybe im wrong cause the only one who can really undestand the nature of the story are you Furiyan. I think i would send them to you in a PM, let me know what you think about them and see if i am not too lost.

Anyway congratulations for the chapter, really like it and hope to...
Read you later.
11/15/2016 c44 1HopelessRomantic183
Okay, so either Merida was already the first to crack in order to save Pitch OR Rapunzel will be...in order to save Pitch. Let's face it, if she lets Pitch die and the Ghosts find out that she had healing powers after the fact then they'll be furious with, not just Rapunzel, but the group as a whole and no longer trust any of them!
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