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4/9/2015 c1 Captain Leska 1997
you did good please continue
3/21/2015 c1 n3mes1s
that was a pretty bad ass start cant wiat for next chapter
3/11/2015 c1 1The Writer Of Fate
Rushed, probably good to look for someone to go over it before posting.

Though, I am interested in this idea. I'd love to see more.
3/6/2015 c1 3SakuraKoi
Oh wow
3/6/2015 c1 Guest
Wow. Another angry mob cliche in a military villages.
3/6/2015 c1 5narmulti
Good story keep it up and UPDATE SOON
3/6/2015 c1 Guest
u did good
3/6/2015 c1 shadowfang jutsu
it need more the fist chapter is too small but it is ok for a start
3/6/2015 c1 bloody nine tailed dragonfox
Like the story sounds like it could go some where don't know if you made it this short on information on purpose to explain later and is naru going be smarter than in cannon
3/5/2015 c1 1Joker Army
Longer chapters needed but off to yood start
3/5/2015 c1 Miku7230
Well... that escalated quickly.
Still, nice story. If you need a beta reader, hit me up with a PM!
Though, the story's a bit short and goes too fast... (like mine! :D)
Either way, good start.

1 Support from me XD
3/5/2015 c1 BANKAIZEN
3/5/2015 c1 1CreedRazerReaper
make longer chapters please, i like the use of the rinne-sharingan. i hope you make it where he earns the right to be godlike and access to the path of the rinnegan and the abilities of the rinne-sharingan instead of what the end of canon make sasuke go all god mode on everyone by knowing everthing about the rinnegan in a matter of seconds. what path are you going to follow? the idiot powerful blond who forgives everything shit that is done to him just because who is parents were or because its morally right, the one where he pretends to be an idiot by either leaving a clone to got live his life while he becomes by either staying at the forest of death or leaves the villages and comes back to hokage, the one where he does the same as before but just to weaken the village and go make his own village and finally where he gets strong until the graduation or earlier and leaves to reestablish uzu or join another village and wants to destroy konoha or just he doesn't give a crap about it.
3/5/2015 c1 Mickykiki1
Him, looks good so far, but a bit short. I expect a lot of things from this story.
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