for Annabeth gets sorted4/3 c1 calypso
u spelled all of this right this is amazing keep writing
u spelled all of this right this is amazing keep writing
3/24/2016 c1 Nizhal
Hey.
First off, the sorting happens in alphabetical order. So, Rose Linden would not be the first to be sorted. Two, do a spell check. Words like bored and since are misspelled. Capitals are important, at the start of each sentence and for saying I. And also, ' After about an hour,' ... an hour? Bit long, don't you think?
That said, I liked this oneshot.
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Hey.
First off, the sorting happens in alphabetical order. So, Rose Linden would not be the first to be sorted. Two, do a spell check. Words like bored and since are misspelled. Capitals are important, at the start of each sentence and for saying I. And also, ' After about an hour,' ... an hour? Bit long, don't you think?
That said, I liked this oneshot.
Sorry for not logging in, but I'm Nizhal Paava here.
11/11/2015 c1 Anonymous
Yes you did spell if right. Even spell-check on Word says so. Although there are times when I think I'm smarter than Bill Gates when it comes to grammar.
~Anne Onymous~
Yes you did spell if right. Even spell-check on Word says so. Although there are times when I think I'm smarter than Bill Gates when it comes to grammar.
~Anne Onymous~
8/8/2015 c1 Guest
RAVENCLAW!
RAVENCLAW!
3/28/2015 c1 
10Kendra PJO
Well how are you supposed to learn your mistakes if every person writes 'Loved it! Write a sequel soon plz!'? Not that I am going to flame, but you could improve in a couple areas.
1) Sorting hat goes in alphabetical order- Chase would be near the front. 2) Since, not sense. 3) An hour? Seems a bit excessive. 4) CAPITAL LETTERS! I is always capital, same with sentence beginnings.
Please don't consider this a flame, it really is a good oneshot.
10Kendra PJOWell how are you supposed to learn your mistakes if every person writes 'Loved it! Write a sequel soon plz!'? Not that I am going to flame, but you could improve in a couple areas.
1) Sorting hat goes in alphabetical order- Chase would be near the front. 2) Since, not sense. 3) An hour? Seems a bit excessive. 4) CAPITAL LETTERS! I is always capital, same with sentence beginnings.
Please don't consider this a flame, it really is a good oneshot.