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4/12/2015 c4 starr
This is beautiful..you are an amazing writer..please continue
3/15/2015 c4 Guest
I really like it - it's just so fluffy :)

Just one thing - put speech marks around the speech, it will make your writing flow better & it'll be easier to see where the speech ends and the narration begins.
3/15/2015 c4 7AvengerGirl17
Great job! Awww! Very creative to have Clarke living in Bell's childhood home! I really loved that part about the measurements on the doorframe! You described everything really well! I could totally picture it! :)
3/10/2015 c3 AvengerGirl17
Still going strong! Loved Clarke's jealousy, and Octavia's bubbliness! Great job! Keep up the great work! :)
3/8/2015 c2 AvengerGirl17
Great work! I love the whole diner interaction! I can totally picture it! :)
3/7/2015 c1 AvengerGirl17
Great job! Definitely continue! :)

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