
2/13/2017 c3
9cherryblossom0103
This is so, so good! Please, please, PLEASE write more! I'm begging you!

This is so, so good! Please, please, PLEASE write more! I'm begging you!
10/10/2015 c3 Guest
Keep going so far is great
Keep going so far is great
8/8/2015 c3 Peb97
love it! an interesting plot and I like how you portrayed the characters up until now.
please continue
love it! an interesting plot and I like how you portrayed the characters up until now.
please continue
3/21/2015 c2
22Arithra
Woho, this is interesting. I look forward to some marauder mischief. James comes across as quite likable but at the same time as a boy who grew up to be somewhat sheltered. He knows of the hardships and probably more about the fire naton than his countrymen, but at the same time he has never quite felt the cruelty personally.
There is also the chivalry he portrays here.
I also liked the fact that you made him afraid since it is a logical reaction.
Good job. I'm looking forward to more.

Woho, this is interesting. I look forward to some marauder mischief. James comes across as quite likable but at the same time as a boy who grew up to be somewhat sheltered. He knows of the hardships and probably more about the fire naton than his countrymen, but at the same time he has never quite felt the cruelty personally.
There is also the chivalry he portrays here.
I also liked the fact that you made him afraid since it is a logical reaction.
Good job. I'm looking forward to more.
3/20/2015 c2
4Deathbistereo95
So we meet Sirius, bad tempered as ever too. Question, are they all going to be benders? Also, other than casual mention are the boys ever going to actually meet some of the ATLA characters (the gang, Zuko, Azula, etc...)? Good chapter though, James is finally on the road. And from the sound of it Sirius is a crappy thief. Looking forward to the next chapter.

So we meet Sirius, bad tempered as ever too. Question, are they all going to be benders? Also, other than casual mention are the boys ever going to actually meet some of the ATLA characters (the gang, Zuko, Azula, etc...)? Good chapter though, James is finally on the road. And from the sound of it Sirius is a crappy thief. Looking forward to the next chapter.
3/16/2015 c1
22Fairy of the Friz
Oh wow this is cool! I'm so curious to see how everything will turn out, who's who and what's what, and all that! XD Though I'm curious about Remus - would he still be a werewolf? Or would there be something else that'll trouble him?

Oh wow this is cool! I'm so curious to see how everything will turn out, who's who and what's what, and all that! XD Though I'm curious about Remus - would he still be a werewolf? Or would there be something else that'll trouble him?
3/15/2015 c1
4Deathbistereo95
Always found the idea interesting; marauders living in the ATLA verse. Can't wait for the next chapter. Meetings soon? Should be fun.

Always found the idea interesting; marauders living in the ATLA verse. Can't wait for the next chapter. Meetings soon? Should be fun.
3/10/2015 c1
9rocketgod123
interesting plot premise. Intrigued to see how you take this on... Nice writing style!

interesting plot premise. Intrigued to see how you take this on... Nice writing style!