for Pay It Forward My Ending2/9/2016 c1 
13Cloelius Princess
I'm actually sorry that there aren't more fictions about this movie. It took me years to watch it but when I did was falled in love with it.
13Cloelius PrincessI'm actually sorry that there aren't more fictions about this movie. It took me years to watch it but when I did was falled in love with it.
1/11/2016 c1 39JohnGilbertVampirehunter
"The other boy and he circled each other till Trevor felt something sharp go into his side"
That's not exactly what happened. The boy drew his knife and then Trevor got shoved toward him and ended up stabbed and I think it was an accident because the look on the boy's face was one of shock not "yay I stabbed him. I like this though. It's happier but still doesn't change theme of the movie (random acts of kindness and random acts of violence).
39JohnGilbertVampirehunter"The other boy and he circled each other till Trevor felt something sharp go into his side"
That's not exactly what happened. The boy drew his knife and then Trevor got shoved toward him and ended up stabbed and I think it was an accident because the look on the boy's face was one of shock not "yay I stabbed him. I like this though. It's happier but still doesn't change theme of the movie (random acts of kindness and random acts of violence).
8/4/2015 c1 13tjw242
Yup, it's short, but we all wanted this ending (﹏) I really liked this. You could've made it better by maybe italicising Trevor's/anyone's thoughts, that way it's clearer. Also, if you just slow it down, I think the imagery would be a bit more powerful. Anyway, great alternate ending :)
- TJ
13tjw242Yup, it's short, but we all wanted this ending (﹏) I really liked this. You could've made it better by maybe italicising Trevor's/anyone's thoughts, that way it's clearer. Also, if you just slow it down, I think the imagery would be a bit more powerful. Anyway, great alternate ending :)
- TJ
5/30/2015 c1 grovyleanime
I like this ending a lot, I just watched the movie and I didn't really like the ending.
I like this ending a lot, I just watched the movie and I didn't really like the ending.