for Fairy Tail: Gaia10/27/2017 c31 Rhino
Good job... Dude? Anyways i absolutely love your story because my parents encourage me to read so I read this fanfiction... An inspiration for many writers ( or wannabe writers including myself) ... Also, this fanfiction is the first fanfiction to make me read fillers... Normally I don't read fillers because either the story is low quality or uninteresting but your use of words and everything in general has made me worship your work ( OK... Maybe not worship but you know what I mean) so I hope you know that your work has made a young stupid boy to love your work... - some random dude :)
Good job... Dude? Anyways i absolutely love your story because my parents encourage me to read so I read this fanfiction... An inspiration for many writers ( or wannabe writers including myself) ... Also, this fanfiction is the first fanfiction to make me read fillers... Normally I don't read fillers because either the story is low quality or uninteresting but your use of words and everything in general has made me worship your work ( OK... Maybe not worship but you know what I mean) so I hope you know that your work has made a young stupid boy to love your work... - some random dude :)
12/12/2016 c31 
5Wanderstar
It's sad that you aren't continuing it anymore and I'm genuinely sorry that I didn't review more. I hope you continue writing anyways even if you're not putting it on Fanfiction.
5WanderstarIt's sad that you aren't continuing it anymore and I'm genuinely sorry that I didn't review more. I hope you continue writing anyways even if you're not putting it on Fanfiction.
11/20/2015 c3 DamonDraco
Sorry for taking so much time to do this review. But I had to reread the chapter to recall it.
As I've said before, it's quite good how you can implement your OCs in Fairy Tail's story. So far it doesn't disappoint, the implementation. Also everyone seems to more or less stay in their character, to that's good :P (By that I mean some characters do things I'd not expect them to).
Also, I'm really liking Rodin as a character, more as a character yes. He has room for development and that should happen smoothly I suppose. I still find odd Makarov inviting someone...but eh, you justified it, so fair enough.
There is some few errors here and there...but who am I to say? It's still understandable so you're good. Also won't lie it's good to see Rodin and Trixie interacting. I'm also really interested in what Rodin's dad had ''done'' to him.
Overall, nice chapte dude. I'll give it a 9/10.
Sorry for taking so much time to do this review. But I had to reread the chapter to recall it.
As I've said before, it's quite good how you can implement your OCs in Fairy Tail's story. So far it doesn't disappoint, the implementation. Also everyone seems to more or less stay in their character, to that's good :P (By that I mean some characters do things I'd not expect them to).
Also, I'm really liking Rodin as a character, more as a character yes. He has room for development and that should happen smoothly I suppose. I still find odd Makarov inviting someone...but eh, you justified it, so fair enough.
There is some few errors here and there...but who am I to say? It's still understandable so you're good. Also won't lie it's good to see Rodin and Trixie interacting. I'm also really interested in what Rodin's dad had ''done'' to him.
Overall, nice chapte dude. I'll give it a 9/10.
11/7/2015 c30 6blue-eyegirl18
I love this story! You are a very talented writter and I cant wait for the next chapter! Stay strong:)
6blue-eyegirl18I love this story! You are a very talented writter and I cant wait for the next chapter! Stay strong:)
10/15/2015 c30 1pokemonking0924
First off glad to see you back in action
Secondly that was some pretty awesome performance by Fairy tail, especially when they tricked those kids they had magic
Now what will happen next, during Angelas encounter from her horrible past?
1pokemonking0924First off glad to see you back in action
Secondly that was some pretty awesome performance by Fairy tail, especially when they tricked those kids they had magic
Now what will happen next, during Angelas encounter from her horrible past?
10/7/2015 c14 1Leengard
Crazy Plans are the best plans, lol
another good chapter with only my nit-picky grammar eye finding any problems (they're all minor and not that big of a deal, to be honest)
1LeengardCrazy Plans are the best plans, lol
another good chapter with only my nit-picky grammar eye finding any problems (they're all minor and not that big of a deal, to be honest)
10/5/2015 c13 Leengard
oo, nice end to the chapter. The foreshadowing is ominous and makes me look forward to what sort of role these cloaked strangers will play in the furture
oo, nice end to the chapter. The foreshadowing is ominous and makes me look forward to what sort of role these cloaked strangers will play in the furture
8/28/2015 c28 1pokemonking0924
Great chapter, great drama and a lot of heart
One concern though the new guild hall wasn't complete until after the tower of heaven arc, but I guess that's you own little spin for this story
Can't wait to see what's in store for the newest member of the guild
Also good luck in school
1pokemonking0924Great chapter, great drama and a lot of heart
One concern though the new guild hall wasn't complete until after the tower of heaven arc, but I guess that's you own little spin for this story
Can't wait to see what's in store for the newest member of the guild
Also good luck in school
8/20/2015 c26 2CowboyXwill53
Look man you're doing a wonderful job; inserting your oc, but not making him the main focus from the cannon part of the anime i like that. you gave him a supporting cast; a big one, but still supporting. then you went and gave him his own oc arcs. wonderfully done
2CowboyXwill53Look man you're doing a wonderful job; inserting your oc, but not making him the main focus from the cannon part of the anime i like that. you gave him a supporting cast; a big one, but still supporting. then you went and gave him his own oc arcs. wonderfully done
8/20/2015 c26 1pokemonking0924
Got to say that this was some fight, a lot of powerful spells thrown everywhere, I especially enjoyed how you used the giant axe idea I gave you and I like the name you gave to it
I also see the true spirit of Fairy Tail in Rodin and Trixie, you demonstrated it perfectly this chapter and something tells me that this spirit is going to be carried on to the next one
1pokemonking0924Got to say that this was some fight, a lot of powerful spells thrown everywhere, I especially enjoyed how you used the giant axe idea I gave you and I like the name you gave to it
I also see the true spirit of Fairy Tail in Rodin and Trixie, you demonstrated it perfectly this chapter and something tells me that this spirit is going to be carried on to the next one
8/16/2015 c25 pokemonking0924
First let me say welcome back
Part 1 of the fight between team captains is looking great so far, a lot of drama leading the the grand finale of this arc, definitely looking forward to it
First let me say welcome back
Part 1 of the fight between team captains is looking great so far, a lot of drama leading the the grand finale of this arc, definitely looking forward to it
7/16/2015 c22 pokemonking0924
got to say that Angela handled that fight like a pro, maybe she has a little bit of that Fairy Tail spirit deep inside
Trixie is up and back in action, glad to see that, but will she remember what happened to her before its too late for everyone
can't wait for the next chapter
got to say that Angela handled that fight like a pro, maybe she has a little bit of that Fairy Tail spirit deep inside
Trixie is up and back in action, glad to see that, but will she remember what happened to her before its too late for everyone
can't wait for the next chapter