for A True Gentleman1/21/2017 c1 Gamer
Bill's speech is off. He talks too much like Fiddleford, which is wrong. In a way. Bill's less cowboy like...
Bill's speech is off. He talks too much like Fiddleford, which is wrong. In a way. Bill's less cowboy like...
5/7/2016 c1 
11SSC
If canon had gone differently, this could have tied up a lot of loose ends very nicely!
11SSCIf canon had gone differently, this could have tied up a lot of loose ends very nicely!
3/23/2016 c1 1bsktcase.y
This is an amazing start! I'm eagerly awaiting more!
(nudge nudge hint hint)
1bsktcase.yThis is an amazing start! I'm eagerly awaiting more!
(nudge nudge hint hint)
10/25/2015 c1 1DeathRaven359
This-along with HNWBM were both amazingly well-written. Keep up the good work!
1DeathRaven359This-along with HNWBM were both amazingly well-written. Keep up the good work!
5/28/2015 c1 13gameloverx
NO FIDDLE DONT MAKE THAT DEAL TOULL REGERET EVERYTHI- oh. Too late
Anyway, about time to give ya a review. Seriously, this is interesting.
Apparently Bill's ADHD only got worse once he became a triangle. BTW, I love your allusions to HNWBM. This is an interesting dynamic, because we can kind of tell when Bill's being a lying asshole and when he's being genuine. Obviously he won't just mess with the "broken" parts of Fiddle's brain but with the nice ones, too. But when Fiddle called him a "godsend" and Bill got all uncomfortable it seemed genuine. Is Bill feeling (slightly, tinsy bit) guilty? No? Maybe?
The one thing I liked from HNWBM was Billy's weird moral code. Some of it (like being impressed by people out for revenge and revengejustice) was on the creepy side, but some of it (like him wanting the town to actually appreciate Mabel's sacrifice) was very noble of him. After the whole scene with the Fez guys, I started to respect Billy a lot more than Gus. I'm curious how his morals (or what's left of em) are gonna play into this story.
Update plz! Love it! :)
13gameloverxNO FIDDLE DONT MAKE THAT DEAL TOULL REGERET EVERYTHI- oh. Too late
Anyway, about time to give ya a review. Seriously, this is interesting.
Apparently Bill's ADHD only got worse once he became a triangle. BTW, I love your allusions to HNWBM. This is an interesting dynamic, because we can kind of tell when Bill's being a lying asshole and when he's being genuine. Obviously he won't just mess with the "broken" parts of Fiddle's brain but with the nice ones, too. But when Fiddle called him a "godsend" and Bill got all uncomfortable it seemed genuine. Is Bill feeling (slightly, tinsy bit) guilty? No? Maybe?
The one thing I liked from HNWBM was Billy's weird moral code. Some of it (like being impressed by people out for revenge and revengejustice) was on the creepy side, but some of it (like him wanting the town to actually appreciate Mabel's sacrifice) was very noble of him. After the whole scene with the Fez guys, I started to respect Billy a lot more than Gus. I'm curious how his morals (or what's left of em) are gonna play into this story.
Update plz! Love it! :)
3/13/2015 c1 8Mrs. Cipher
Hey your back! I was pretty excited when I noticed this pop into my inbox. I really loved hNwBM- probably one of the best fanfics out there! A sequel would be supper cool! I had always loved this sort of concept- you know- back when everyone thought McGucket was the author. But, cannon or not, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories in the future!
8Mrs. CipherHey your back! I was pretty excited when I noticed this pop into my inbox. I really loved hNwBM- probably one of the best fanfics out there! A sequel would be supper cool! I had always loved this sort of concept- you know- back when everyone thought McGucket was the author. But, cannon or not, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories in the future!