
3/23/2015 c1
5Luke Dragneel
While your idea was a good one, you made some mistakes all over the place, from grammar to actual game mechanics here.
Powers from PM don't simply go "ok, I wanna make a brute power 5", it takes an idea like Telekinesis or electromagnetism and puts in at a 4 or 5 PRT(which you spelled wrong) power rating. To put that into perspective, Bakuda the mad bomber who can create a time bomb is a Tinker level 6, one(or two) level above what a single charge from PM can do.
Not to mention that Powers would naturally come diverse to begin with(like Shadow Stalker is a Breaker 3, Stranger 2, and Mover 1 because she turns into a shadow/smoke-like state.).
Besides, the PRT power rating is simply a format that tells the PRT troopers how they should engage the target(a level 4 should be possible for a squad of PRT troopers to take down with a level 5 needing the help of a single cape to do the same), think about it like this, Nilbog is a Master 7, simply two levels above a single charge.

While your idea was a good one, you made some mistakes all over the place, from grammar to actual game mechanics here.
Powers from PM don't simply go "ok, I wanna make a brute power 5", it takes an idea like Telekinesis or electromagnetism and puts in at a 4 or 5 PRT(which you spelled wrong) power rating. To put that into perspective, Bakuda the mad bomber who can create a time bomb is a Tinker level 6, one(or two) level above what a single charge from PM can do.
Not to mention that Powers would naturally come diverse to begin with(like Shadow Stalker is a Breaker 3, Stranger 2, and Mover 1 because she turns into a shadow/smoke-like state.).
Besides, the PRT power rating is simply a format that tells the PRT troopers how they should engage the target(a level 4 should be possible for a squad of PRT troopers to take down with a level 5 needing the help of a single cape to do the same), think about it like this, Nilbog is a Master 7, simply two levels above a single charge.
3/14/2015 c1 Confusing as fuc
this chapter was sooo confusing to me that it basically fucking my brain cell right now...no the cyoa is not a joke, the power is overpower yes but you yourself is more of a retard if you dont choose eidolon, the power doesnt have a manual so basically unless you have eidolon which help you by give you memory you are basically SOL. With with the OMG all of that complication with all of that you could have get more than those power.
this chapter was sooo confusing to me that it basically fucking my brain cell right now...no the cyoa is not a joke, the power is overpower yes but you yourself is more of a retard if you dont choose eidolon, the power doesnt have a manual so basically unless you have eidolon which help you by give you memory you are basically SOL. With with the OMG all of that complication with all of that you could have get more than those power.
3/11/2015 c1 Faldorion
jeaaah sorry but I report this
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jeaaah sorry but I report this
Read the rules Non-stories are not allowed to be posted inside the story section