
10/13/2021 c12 Maximum Rhapsody
Do you think in the future you would make a story of Gohan traveling between worlds or in the world of Fairy Tail?
Do you think in the future you would make a story of Gohan traveling between worlds or in the world of Fairy Tail?
4/12/2015 c2 doglover1290
This is pretty interesting, though the lines should be spaced out a bit more in the longer paragraphs to improve readability (namely the first one and the paragraph saturday 12:30 am randy's POV [the first one])
This is pretty interesting, though the lines should be spaced out a bit more in the longer paragraphs to improve readability (namely the first one and the paragraph saturday 12:30 am randy's POV [the first one])
3/13/2015 c1 02D34th
Slow down and take your time! This chapter is completely rushed and it can be better, I know it.
Slow down and take your time! This chapter is completely rushed and it can be better, I know it.