for This is Where We Divide5/22/2019 c1 Lost
Go to hell! All zutarians!
Go to hell! All zutarians!
4/23/2018 c1 Guest
More plz!
More plz!
573/14/2015 c1 BlueLion
it's a bit rushed and muddled in one chapter, where a slow development in perhaps three chapters would have served better. You could have gone deeper into the various charas' perspectives. Also, spelling/grammar is somewhat lacking. What do you mean with "principals"? Perhaps wrong word for principles?
The basic plot idea is interesting though.
it's a bit rushed and muddled in one chapter, where a slow development in perhaps three chapters would have served better. You could have gone deeper into the various charas' perspectives. Also, spelling/grammar is somewhat lacking. What do you mean with "principals"? Perhaps wrong word for principles?
The basic plot idea is interesting though.
3/13/2015 c1 MarkCope2015
This was sooo good, not to bash on other authors but so many do betrayal and angst in a really light way, this was very realistic and I thought the character conversations and reactions were great.
Hope you do end up doing a follow up at some point.
This was sooo good, not to bash on other authors but so many do betrayal and angst in a really light way, this was very realistic and I thought the character conversations and reactions were great.
Hope you do end up doing a follow up at some point.
3/13/2015 c1 Guest
you should really do a follow-up to this !
you should really do a follow-up to this !