for A New Beginning12/15/2020 c1 mmmm
love it! wish it would be longer!
love it! wish it would be longer!
1/30/2017 c1 
2little miss michelle
This is so beautiful! I know you probably ment it to be a one shot but I hope you consider continuing. Hermione and malfoy family interactions intrigue me
2little miss michelleThis is so beautiful! I know you probably ment it to be a one shot but I hope you consider continuing. Hermione and malfoy family interactions intrigue me
3/14/2015 c1 1BouncyCastle08
I love reading your writing. It is a perfect, cupcake like, small moment that is isolated and told. I wish they were more pletiful but not longer as it would mar how good a style choice it is to make them this length.
1BouncyCastle08I love reading your writing. It is a perfect, cupcake like, small moment that is isolated and told. I wish they were more pletiful but not longer as it would mar how good a style choice it is to make them this length.
3/13/2015 c1 16AnaWolf
Short, but incredibly powerful and VERY touching! I really loved it a lot! The ending hits the spot with the lines of loss and hope. Really beautiful!
16AnaWolfShort, but incredibly powerful and VERY touching! I really loved it a lot! The ending hits the spot with the lines of loss and hope. Really beautiful!
3/13/2015 c1 6504636
I loved this! You captured the scene really well I think, and your characterisation was spot on which I think is a feat considering you didn't just have to capture the characters as we know them, but a changed version of them after the war. It was very believably done.
You had some really lovely lines in there too. I really liked the opening, with "broken stone, broken glass, broken lives", it really hit home. Then the ending with "the loss of loved ones, the loss of innocence, the loss of home" paired with "the spark of hope, of happiness, of new beginnings" I think worked perfectly.
Your SPaG was also perfect which made it a really pleasant read :) Thanks for writing!
I loved this! You captured the scene really well I think, and your characterisation was spot on which I think is a feat considering you didn't just have to capture the characters as we know them, but a changed version of them after the war. It was very believably done.
You had some really lovely lines in there too. I really liked the opening, with "broken stone, broken glass, broken lives", it really hit home. Then the ending with "the loss of loved ones, the loss of innocence, the loss of home" paired with "the spark of hope, of happiness, of new beginnings" I think worked perfectly.
Your SPaG was also perfect which made it a really pleasant read :) Thanks for writing!
3/13/2015 c1 106byunbonbon
Aw, I really enjoyed it! It was a good story! Especially the parts with Draco and Hermione, but what can you do that's all a Dramione fan see's! Anywho, Fabulous Job!
106byunbonbonAw, I really enjoyed it! It was a good story! Especially the parts with Draco and Hermione, but what can you do that's all a Dramione fan see's! Anywho, Fabulous Job!