for All you need is Love4/27/2016 c4 Hey
Can you continue writing ?
It is a very good story
Can you continue writing ?
It is a very good story
12/25/2015 c4 Miibitlala
I am really curious about tenma! Its going great! Do continue and update soon!
I am really curious about tenma! Its going great! Do continue and update soon!
12/1/2015 c4 
7TheWheezyCauldron
The story was good and was it because his parents died that Tenma turned cold to his friends? And I'm waiting for the update... Do it soon this time...
We have one motto... Kyouten frevr... (I'm a huge fan of Kyouten)
Bye...
~Wheezy
7TheWheezyCauldronThe story was good and was it because his parents died that Tenma turned cold to his friends? And I'm waiting for the update... Do it soon this time...
We have one motto... Kyouten frevr... (I'm a huge fan of Kyouten)
Bye...
~Wheezy
11/5/2015 c3 miibitlala
Cool.. continue XD O_O
Cool.. continue XD O_O
10/11/2015 c3 Toto
KyouTen FOREVAH! !
KyouTen FOREVAH! !
9/8/2015 c3 D3D3B14NK5
This is interesting ya'know. The cliff hanger is seriously bugging me. Please please PLEASE give at least Hints as to what 'the thing' is?
This is interesting ya'know. The cliff hanger is seriously bugging me. Please please PLEASE give at least Hints as to what 'the thing' is?
7/19/2015 c3 Guest
Ever aince that day? And Sasuke playing soccer is cute!
Ever aince that day? And Sasuke playing soccer is cute!
7/15/2015 c3 Guest
Will Tenma join the soccer team? This was a good chapter but try to make them longer.
Will Tenma join the soccer team? This was a good chapter but try to make them longer.
7/15/2015 c3 28Draco de Laviathan
please update soon omg it's been so long since i've been so excited about a fanfic! i mean kyouten is my number one otp and cold tenma is just 333
your grammar is fine though, you don't need to worry about it :3 i'm really interested in where is this story going so i hope you update soon!
28Draco de Laviathanplease update soon omg it's been so long since i've been so excited about a fanfic! i mean kyouten is my number one otp and cold tenma is just 333
your grammar is fine though, you don't need to worry about it :3 i'm really interested in where is this story going so i hope you update soon!
3/18/2015 c2 Guest
This is a cool start to the story. Tenma is a cold person who transfer to Raimon high and needs help to see the light. Update soon.
This is a cool start to the story. Tenma is a cold person who transfer to Raimon high and needs help to see the light. Update soon.