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6/4/2015 c4 Telron
great chapter. bit short though
3/16/2015 c3 Telron
interesting weapons
3/16/2015 c2 BANKAIZEN
3/14/2015 c1 1Comet17
Tip when you finish the story you written try to edit it because there are some mistake. it seem like you finish writing it but didn't edit and publish it
3/14/2015 c1 Telron
not bad, your guy could use some more thought though so as to explain why he does what he does. Also his IS could use some more details in color scheme since red, orange and black does not paint a clear picture same with almost demonic in shape. How is it demonic looking? does it have demon horns? also I think you meant right not wright when it came to flamethrower position. Yeah. . .Looking it over a second time it could use some work but eh not a bad start.

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