for Dragon of the Elements7/4/2015 c14 Deep Sea Diver Man
Incest thing sure why the fuck not, Not a bad chapter that sage tho...rip
Incest thing sure why the fuck not, Not a bad chapter that sage tho...rip
6/24/2015 c13 soul beater
no incest no incest NO INCEST!
no incest no incest NO INCEST!
6/23/2015 c13 Guest145
I know that I have no right to tell you how to write your story however if you are looking for reader advice (as you never mentioned one way or another) would you please have Yukari end up with Kenshin? My though process on this is since they have gone through events together that the other women he ends up with can't ever fully comprehend their relationship would be at least as strong as the one he currently has with Rias if not stronger and to not have that bond develop into a true romantic one in this type (harem/echi) of story would be extremely hard for most of us to understand. At least in my opinion, I don't know how many others are thinking this way but I would imagine that there would be quite a few with similar thought processes.
I know that I have no right to tell you how to write your story however if you are looking for reader advice (as you never mentioned one way or another) would you please have Yukari end up with Kenshin? My though process on this is since they have gone through events together that the other women he ends up with can't ever fully comprehend their relationship would be at least as strong as the one he currently has with Rias if not stronger and to not have that bond develop into a true romantic one in this type (harem/echi) of story would be extremely hard for most of us to understand. At least in my opinion, I don't know how many others are thinking this way but I would imagine that there would be quite a few with similar thought processes.
6/23/2015 c13 flamingscythe
nice chapter and i like how you making the story flow differently with gasper and kenshin fight vail
nice chapter and i like how you making the story flow differently with gasper and kenshin fight vail
6/23/2015 c13 
2definitelynotyeehaw
Thanks for taking my review into consideration. And I may sound really biased to issei, but could you put kuroka with him. She's just one of my favorite characters.
2definitelynotyeehawThanks for taking my review into consideration. And I may sound really biased to issei, but could you put kuroka with him. She's just one of my favorite characters.
6/20/2015 c12 nexus2200
You are azmazing author your doing a great job plz keep this absolutely amazing story going!
You are azmazing author your doing a great job plz keep this absolutely amazing story going!
6/20/2015 c12 definitelynotyeehaw
Quick question: do none of the girls give a shit about issei and then it becomes then kenshin show? Or is something gonna happen to issei? Because he's kinda just there with nothing really happening to him.
Quick question: do none of the girls give a shit about issei and then it becomes then kenshin show? Or is something gonna happen to issei? Because he's kinda just there with nothing really happening to him.
6/14/2015 c11 Argorok
Hope you make lemons soon. For the first lemon make a threesome between Kenshin/Rias/Akeno.
Hope you make lemons soon. For the first lemon make a threesome between Kenshin/Rias/Akeno.
5/18/2015 c6 10Kaore Ryu
Wow... I forgot I said that to you. Not sure she would lose her rank as a high class devil and her peerage though, since all she'd lose is the name and power derived from said name. Loved the chapter by the way! I thinka logical choice for a familiar for him would be some kind of fairy seeing as his cards are essentially fairies... I think.
10Kaore RyuWow... I forgot I said that to you. Not sure she would lose her rank as a high class devil and her peerage though, since all she'd lose is the name and power derived from said name. Loved the chapter by the way! I thinka logical choice for a familiar for him would be some kind of fairy seeing as his cards are essentially fairies... I think.
5/9/2015 c5 Kaore Ryu
I just thought offf an even more extreme solution to brea up this marriag then giving up her virginity... renounce the Gremory name. Not sure it would work exactly but it has potential.
I just thought offf an even more extreme solution to brea up this marriag then giving up her virginity... renounce the Gremory name. Not sure it would work exactly but it has potential.