for Dragon of the Elements10/21/2020 c1 XenoLucifer
Honestly, you should probably just rewrite this story and split it up in parts. Because the story is so huge that the difference between your writing at chapter 1 and chapter 100 is way too big. Feels like what you wanted with the story changed as you've been writing too.
Honestly, you should probably just rewrite this story and split it up in parts. Because the story is so huge that the difference between your writing at chapter 1 and chapter 100 is way too big. Feels like what you wanted with the story changed as you've been writing too.
10/4/2020 c1 UzumakiTatsuya
from badass to virgin boy with problems dont know why u made him like that sorry dropping half way
from badass to virgin boy with problems dont know why u made him like that sorry dropping half way
338/30/2020 c1 jksadasdasdasdas
So this character was taken from another world simply to become the damned slave of a spoiled girl? It is the same formula that 99% of the stories use, no matter how strong the character is, he always ends up being reincarnated as a mere slave in a nobility! Cliche and generic!
So this character was taken from another world simply to become the damned slave of a spoiled girl? It is the same formula that 99% of the stories use, no matter how strong the character is, he always ends up being reincarnated as a mere slave in a nobility! Cliche and generic!