for Essence5/9 c20 Guest
Hopefully everything is well. Lowkey stoked for this update
Hopefully everything is well. Lowkey stoked for this update
4/29 c12 toa1311
Sabrina said that Kent was the only one to win the marsh badge that year a couple chapters ago but then mentions another trainer gained the badge the same year as Kent.
Sabrina said that Kent was the only one to win the marsh badge that year a couple chapters ago but then mentions another trainer gained the badge the same year as Kent.
4/10 c20 Guest
Starting to think these chapters (especially after the last post) are gonna be spaced out a bit longer especially with the current stage in the story. Due to the whole articuno egg, Ash staying mainly in pallet town, and the “freedom” or range of options that now produces. Definitely hope though the next chapter is soon want to see what the next teammate will be!
Starting to think these chapters (especially after the last post) are gonna be spaced out a bit longer especially with the current stage in the story. Due to the whole articuno egg, Ash staying mainly in pallet town, and the “freedom” or range of options that now produces. Definitely hope though the next chapter is soon want to see what the next teammate will be!
4/10 c6 
1mixoraptor
Hey, I just read Kanto 6 again and noticed an error, when Ash looked at the scyther in the team rocket battle and thought about how he wanted one there is only scizor as evolution mentioned, I know it came out far before kleavor existed but it just doesn't make sense from an inuniverse perspective. Just wanted to mention it, incase you didn't notice, thanks for your story its my favourite.
1mixoraptorHey, I just read Kanto 6 again and noticed an error, when Ash looked at the scyther in the team rocket battle and thought about how he wanted one there is only scizor as evolution mentioned, I know it came out far before kleavor existed but it just doesn't make sense from an inuniverse perspective. Just wanted to mention it, incase you didn't notice, thanks for your story its my favourite.
4/1 c1 Guest
Heard this is a popular story, so gonna check it all out. The first chapter is good, a good start. So a Growlithe starter is a nice idea. Arcanines are my fav canine pokemon.
Heard this is a popular story, so gonna check it all out. The first chapter is good, a good start. So a Growlithe starter is a nice idea. Arcanines are my fav canine pokemon.
3/15 c20 Stardust Omega
You insufferable jerk uou can't leave it on a cliffhanger like that and drop the story for 10 years
You insufferable jerk uou can't leave it on a cliffhanger like that and drop the story for 10 years
3/14 c20 Yushiro
Hey when will the new chapter come out. I am really excited for the next chapter .
Hey when will the new chapter come out. I am really excited for the next chapter .
3/14 c20 Guest
Hey when will the new chapter come out . I am really excited where this story will go.
Hey when will the new chapter come out . I am really excited where this story will go.
3/13 c20 Guest
It would be absolutely amazing if he posted the next chapter on the 10 year anniversary of the story. Wonder if that was what he was going for all along….
It would be absolutely amazing if he posted the next chapter on the 10 year anniversary of the story. Wonder if that was what he was going for all along….
3/5 c20 2bloodlinenaruto
Anyone seen any recent update regarding the next chapter. I dont want the author to burn out , but I also cannot wait for the next chapter
2bloodlinenarutoAnyone seen any recent update regarding the next chapter. I dont want the author to burn out , but I also cannot wait for the next chapter
2/27 c20 lordcromwell
I am beyond happy that this story has been picked back up. I can see the difference in writing style from the earlier chapters but I think it's great. I love that you develop the characters and the relationship between them. I can't wait for the next chapter
I am beyond happy that this story has been picked back up. I can see the difference in writing style from the earlier chapters but I think it's great. I love that you develop the characters and the relationship between them. I can't wait for the next chapter