for A New Era6/29/2016 c6 Guest
This is so Good. I am hoping that now that The thigts Pedrad is finished, you get to continue this One... I love it!
This is so Good. I am hoping that now that The thigts Pedrad is finished, you get to continue this One... I love it!
12/20/2015 c6 
1SpinningDreams
Are you continuing this story? I really hope you are, cuz I really like this story. I really think it could go somewhere. Hope you choose to continue this.
1SpinningDreamsAre you continuing this story? I really hope you are, cuz I really like this story. I really think it could go somewhere. Hope you choose to continue this.
11/9/2015 c6 15MurmeringWhisper
Naaaww, this was absolutely perfect! I so hoped that they would confess their feelings for each other already and I was a bit worried since Tris is still sick. But that slow, drawn out confession was just so adorable and sweet. It was so so so sweet to see him so not sure about what to tell her, Tris had to literally urge it out of him. I like the soft side of Eric and how he is so gentle with her in that moment, and the kiss, oh my goodness, so sensual! I also really adored Tris' stubborness, so relatable but the way Eric treats her is just soo sweet, how he takes care of her and would gladly continue kissing her or talk about it but denies them both because of Tris' recovery..
This is soo well written, I would love to see this continued! :)
15MurmeringWhisperNaaaww, this was absolutely perfect! I so hoped that they would confess their feelings for each other already and I was a bit worried since Tris is still sick. But that slow, drawn out confession was just so adorable and sweet. It was so so so sweet to see him so not sure about what to tell her, Tris had to literally urge it out of him. I like the soft side of Eric and how he is so gentle with her in that moment, and the kiss, oh my goodness, so sensual! I also really adored Tris' stubborness, so relatable but the way Eric treats her is just soo sweet, how he takes care of her and would gladly continue kissing her or talk about it but denies them both because of Tris' recovery..
This is soo well written, I would love to see this continued! :)
11/9/2015 c3 MurmeringWhisper
Haha, nice one to set up Jake to give Tris a little too much attention as well as setting up Ariana to be attracted to Eric!
That talk to Andrew went better than they expected and I hope that they will eventually get rid of Marcus. So curious to know whether you will elaborate more on meetings between Eric and Natalie. Again it's so adorable how Eric takes care of Tris :) I hope it's nothing serious and only a cold or something and that Eric will once again take good care of Tris :)
Haha, nice one to set up Jake to give Tris a little too much attention as well as setting up Ariana to be attracted to Eric!
That talk to Andrew went better than they expected and I hope that they will eventually get rid of Marcus. So curious to know whether you will elaborate more on meetings between Eric and Natalie. Again it's so adorable how Eric takes care of Tris :) I hope it's nothing serious and only a cold or something and that Eric will once again take good care of Tris :)
11/9/2015 c2 MurmeringWhisper
The things Eric does for Tris, it's so cute..
I like that these chapters are so long and elaborate about everything that happened so far. Like how the war was prevented and how Eric sent Jeanine on a wrong track about Tris' divergence, very well thought through! And I also like the subtle slowburn for Eric and Tris :)
The things Eric does for Tris, it's so cute..
I like that these chapters are so long and elaborate about everything that happened so far. Like how the war was prevented and how Eric sent Jeanine on a wrong track about Tris' divergence, very well thought through! And I also like the subtle slowburn for Eric and Tris :)
11/9/2015 c1 MurmeringWhisper
Wow, I've read this before but I just found it again and have to re-read to trigger my memory. :)
Wow, I've read this before but I just found it again and have to re-read to trigger my memory. :)
11/4/2015 c6 bianconiglio
This story is great, it can't be left like this! I hope you will continue it soon!
This story is great, it can't be left like this! I hope you will continue it soon!
8/16/2015 c6 Everlastingreaderoffiction
Beautiful story! Please could you finish it, as really want to know if they finally get together.
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Beautiful story! Please could you finish it, as really want to know if they finally get together.
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7/13/2015 c6 sineoneontnee
This is a good Eric/Tris fic, even though I am more of a Four/Tris fan, and I can't wait to see how their relationship develop.
This is a good Eric/Tris fic, even though I am more of a Four/Tris fan, and I can't wait to see how their relationship develop.