for A New Era6/22/2015 c6 JackyAttacky
I love how tender and sensual you made this seen. The intimacy in how they revealed their feelings was intense and absolutely perfect for the story line and characters you created. Counting down until the next chapter!
I love how tender and sensual you made this seen. The intimacy in how they revealed their feelings was intense and absolutely perfect for the story line and characters you created. Counting down until the next chapter!
6/22/2015 c6 
8Savanah Rose
I had to go back and reread the other chapters since it had been awhile, but I'm not sure how much of a complaint that is.
I never expected a story of Eric and Tris to draw me in as much as this one has. You are doing a great job of drawing me in to this story. I can't wait for Tris to feel better so she and Eric can interact in a "normal" manner!
8Savanah RoseI had to go back and reread the other chapters since it had been awhile, but I'm not sure how much of a complaint that is.
I never expected a story of Eric and Tris to draw me in as much as this one has. You are doing a great job of drawing me in to this story. I can't wait for Tris to feel better so she and Eric can interact in a "normal" manner!
6/22/2015 c6 1BK2U
I know a lot of people would complain that Eric is not acting in character, but I think that's exactly the point of this story: what we saw of Eric in Divergent isn't necessarily who he really wants to be on the inside.
Tris, though...are we gonna get a clearer explanation of what happened with her and Four? ;-)
1BK2UI know a lot of people would complain that Eric is not acting in character, but I think that's exactly the point of this story: what we saw of Eric in Divergent isn't necessarily who he really wants to be on the inside.
Tris, though...are we gonna get a clearer explanation of what happened with her and Four? ;-)
5/19/2015 c5 1lafauxpas
Loving this story! I love a divergent Eric crushing on Tris. I think their dynamic is great. I like the way you addressed the max and Jeanine situation. I am following with baited breath.
Thank you for sharing and writing !
1lafauxpasLoving this story! I love a divergent Eric crushing on Tris. I think their dynamic is great. I like the way you addressed the max and Jeanine situation. I am following with baited breath.
Thank you for sharing and writing !
5/9/2015 c5 1BK2U
I'm really enjoying this story, especially how you turned Eric into a Divergent - a brilliant move, especially considering the description of him as an Erudite in Dauntless clothing (or something to that effect) in the book.
1BK2UI'm really enjoying this story, especially how you turned Eric into a Divergent - a brilliant move, especially considering the description of him as an Erudite in Dauntless clothing (or something to that effect) in the book.
5/6/2015 c5 priprisci
Oh god, please update
I love this story
Oh god, please update
I love this story
4/23/2015 c5 FTERguest
Awesome story please keep going and PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
Awesome story please keep going and PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
4/21/2015 c5 gest3323
I love your story. Your story changed the perspective in which I saw Eric and your doing very good job with the story. It's just starting so give your self a chance to write more and as time pass more people will read and review your story most if not all will be good comments but there will be people who will criticize very badly, it may sometimes bring you down but don'tdon't let and one last thing PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSS update ssssoooonnnnn.
I love your story. Your story changed the perspective in which I saw Eric and your doing very good job with the story. It's just starting so give your self a chance to write more and as time pass more people will read and review your story most if not all will be good comments but there will be people who will criticize very badly, it may sometimes bring you down but don'tdon't let and one last thing PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSS update ssssoooonnnnn.