for A New Era3/22/2015 c3 Zamilovany
My first Eric/Tris story I wasn't sure if I would like it but I do. Eric's attittu change definitely caught me by surprise how nic/good he is with Tris but he still has the hard attitude towards others. Hope you can update soon.
My first Eric/Tris story I wasn't sure if I would like it but I do. Eric's attittu change definitely caught me by surprise how nic/good he is with Tris but he still has the hard attitude towards others. Hope you can update soon.
3/22/2015 c3 RileyAnders
Without kidding it took me about five hours to go through the political crap, no offence, I know it's probably crucial for the story, that's just one of the two most irritating things in the whole world for me...
Apart from that I think thing we have a potential divorce and one big sexy male nurse on the horizon :D meaning: keep it coming, girl! :D
Without kidding it took me about five hours to go through the political crap, no offence, I know it's probably crucial for the story, that's just one of the two most irritating things in the whole world for me...
Apart from that I think thing we have a potential divorce and one big sexy male nurse on the horizon :D meaning: keep it coming, girl! :D
3/21/2015 c3 
7rockin1323
Oh my. I need more! I Hope Eric takes care of tris when she's sick. I hope you update soon
7rockin1323Oh my. I need more! I Hope Eric takes care of tris when she's sick. I hope you update soon
3/21/2015 c2 RileyAnders
How awesome is that? Big bad wolf turns out to be one of the cuttest puppy dog in the pack! Sorry, I'm not sure what I'm babbling about either...
Anyway, Eric's just great! This story is also great and it would be a shame not to continue, so... is there a new chapter coming soon?
How awesome is that? Big bad wolf turns out to be one of the cuttest puppy dog in the pack! Sorry, I'm not sure what I'm babbling about either...
Anyway, Eric's just great! This story is also great and it would be a shame not to continue, so... is there a new chapter coming soon?
3/17/2015 c2 Guest
Wow didn't see that one coming lol looking forward to the next chapter
Wow didn't see that one coming lol looking forward to the next chapter
3/17/2015 c1 Guest
This is sooooo awesome can't wait to see how this all plays out:)
This is sooooo awesome can't wait to see how this all plays out:)
3/17/2015 c2 KCK1169
Ah! Can't wait for another update. I love Eric/Tris, and I love how you're portraying Eric in this story. It makes sense that he would be harder on the initiates, and now he's viewing Tris in a different light. Please update soon!
Ah! Can't wait for another update. I love Eric/Tris, and I love how you're portraying Eric in this story. It makes sense that he would be harder on the initiates, and now he's viewing Tris in a different light. Please update soon!
3/16/2015 c1 catch39
Really enjoyed the beginning. His reasons for his behavior during initiation makes sense, so it doesn't seem like he did a 180 degree attitude wise. Loved reading about Eric, the Gentleman.
Really enjoyed the beginning. His reasons for his behavior during initiation makes sense, so it doesn't seem like he did a 180 degree attitude wise. Loved reading about Eric, the Gentleman.
3/16/2015 c2 JackyAttacky
I love this story! You make the relationship between Tris and Eric so natural
And believable! I can't wait to keep reading!
I love this story! You make the relationship between Tris and Eric so natural
And believable! I can't wait to keep reading!
3/15/2015 c1 igotreallycreative
That was such a good chapter! One of the best Eric/Tris stories I've read. Can't wait for the next chapter!
That was such a good chapter! One of the best Eric/Tris stories I've read. Can't wait for the next chapter!