for The Reach of Wolves11/23/2024 c42 Miva4
This is the best asoiaf fanfic I've read! I will be waiting eagerly for an update!
This is the best asoiaf fanfic I've read! I will be waiting eagerly for an update!
9/27/2024 c8 Robert
This makes more sense Bran now the shit is hitting the fan:)
This makes more sense Bran now the shit is hitting the fan:)
9/2/2024 c42 George Cristian810
Please , dont bring the ice walkers in . Please dont destroy an excelent story with that sh plot .
Please , dont bring the ice walkers in . Please dont destroy an excelent story with that sh plot .
9/1/2024 c42 GladiatorGreyman
This is awesome, i binge read the first 41 chapters yesterday and i all ready get a new chapter.
This is awesome, i binge read the first 41 chapters yesterday and i all ready get a new chapter.
8/19/2024 c41 
4puttyman24
Here's hoping the plan to seize the Bloody Gate works and The Eyrie is sealed off.
I feel so sorry for the defenders of Castle Hornwood. Stannis and his Red Priestess have much to answer for, I hope Robb and the others can keep Shireen safe from him and can't wait for Robb to crush him.
4puttyman24Here's hoping the plan to seize the Bloody Gate works and The Eyrie is sealed off.
I feel so sorry for the defenders of Castle Hornwood. Stannis and his Red Priestess have much to answer for, I hope Robb and the others can keep Shireen safe from him and can't wait for Robb to crush him.
8/19/2024 c24 1jdboss2
Jon Snow has no legitimate claim to the Iron Throne, despite what many fan fiction writers suggest. In the intricate world of Westeros, the laws of succession are clear and well-established, yet some stories, like the one you’ve presented, overlook these crucial details.
In your story, Lyanna Stark willingly goes off with Rhaegar Targaryen and supposedly marries him in secret. However, even if Lyanna consented to this union, it would not have been legally binding without the approval of her lord father, Rickard Stark. In the noble society of Westeros, a marriage, especially one involving such prominent houses as the Starks and Targaryens, requires the consent of both families. A secret marriage, conducted without the knowledge and approval of the bride's father, holds no legal standing.
Furthermore, Rhaegar himself would have needed the approval of his own father, King Aerys II Targaryen, for such a marriage to be recognized. Without these approvals, any marriage between Rhaegar and Lyanna would be considered illegitimate, and any children from this union would be viewed as bastards under the law.
Jon’s claim is further weakened by the fact that he was never formally recognized or legitimized by his supposed father, Rhaegar. As a result, his status remains that of a Stark bastard, without any legal right to the Iron Throne.
Therefore, according to the laws of succession in Westeros, the true line of succession would have continued through the Targaryen line, with Viserys Targaryen (Viserys III) being next in line. After his death, the crown should have passed to the eldest Baratheon brother, making Stannis Baratheon the rightful heir following King Robert’s death.
In conclusion, while your story presents an intriguing scenario, it overlooks the essential legalities that govern noble marriages and succession in Westeros. Without the consent of their respective lord fathers, any marriage between Lyanna and Rhaegar would be null and void, leaving Jon Snow without a legitimate claim to the Iron Throne.
1jdboss2Jon Snow has no legitimate claim to the Iron Throne, despite what many fan fiction writers suggest. In the intricate world of Westeros, the laws of succession are clear and well-established, yet some stories, like the one you’ve presented, overlook these crucial details.
In your story, Lyanna Stark willingly goes off with Rhaegar Targaryen and supposedly marries him in secret. However, even if Lyanna consented to this union, it would not have been legally binding without the approval of her lord father, Rickard Stark. In the noble society of Westeros, a marriage, especially one involving such prominent houses as the Starks and Targaryens, requires the consent of both families. A secret marriage, conducted without the knowledge and approval of the bride's father, holds no legal standing.
Furthermore, Rhaegar himself would have needed the approval of his own father, King Aerys II Targaryen, for such a marriage to be recognized. Without these approvals, any marriage between Rhaegar and Lyanna would be considered illegitimate, and any children from this union would be viewed as bastards under the law.
Jon’s claim is further weakened by the fact that he was never formally recognized or legitimized by his supposed father, Rhaegar. As a result, his status remains that of a Stark bastard, without any legal right to the Iron Throne.
Therefore, according to the laws of succession in Westeros, the true line of succession would have continued through the Targaryen line, with Viserys Targaryen (Viserys III) being next in line. After his death, the crown should have passed to the eldest Baratheon brother, making Stannis Baratheon the rightful heir following King Robert’s death.
In conclusion, while your story presents an intriguing scenario, it overlooks the essential legalities that govern noble marriages and succession in Westeros. Without the consent of their respective lord fathers, any marriage between Lyanna and Rhaegar would be null and void, leaving Jon Snow without a legitimate claim to the Iron Throne.