for another chance1/5/2016 c1 Guest
do next! i like it!
do next! i like it!
3/15/2015 c1 
21sharp52092
Sorry you don't have any reviews yet. Hang in there. Though from reading this first story, you have several punctuation and capitalization errors. Perhaps you could try searching for a beta.
21sharp52092Sorry you don't have any reviews yet. Hang in there. Though from reading this first story, you have several punctuation and capitalization errors. Perhaps you could try searching for a beta.