
11/17/2024 c37 Justasnake
Some of the commenters dont seem to understand what fanfiction means. This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read. Its written better than some published books and I cannot wait to read more.
Some of the commenters dont seem to understand what fanfiction means. This is one of the best stories I’ve ever read. Its written better than some published books and I cannot wait to read more.
11/15/2024 c2 Guest
err, If he was "Master of Death" then the Hallows would have followed him. At his desire for a wand the Elder Wand would have revealed itself to him. At his desire to hide, the cloak would have veiled him. There's no way Harry would have been rendered powerless like this.
err, If he was "Master of Death" then the Hallows would have followed him. At his desire for a wand the Elder Wand would have revealed itself to him. At his desire to hide, the cloak would have veiled him. There's no way Harry would have been rendered powerless like this.
10/26/2024 c37 ava da keda
I am so curious to know what happens next! With all the changes even the plot of the Hobbit can not happen and then also not LotR itself as well! I hope you will update again, I reallly like this!
I am so curious to know what happens next! With all the changes even the plot of the Hobbit can not happen and then also not LotR itself as well! I hope you will update again, I reallly like this!
10/21/2024 c1 Guest
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10/11/2024 c37 asdasd
how I miss this... :/
how I miss this... :/
9/26/2024 c37 Guest
this whole story seems to favor 99.99% to tolkins universe and only 0.01% of Harry with only magic i ever read here was name "Harry Potter", potions, wand, Patronus, ignis, 2 runes, mention of felix felics wasted on a pony and instant aparrarition apprentantly so evil that is should not be used in direst of emergencies.
I clear theme i get from this is that this story is not meant for harry potter fans, I have no idea why author chose HP in first place, his brilliance with words, his meticulous world building of tolkin and detail he poured in to linguistics would have much suited if he created OC character and had not tried to HP, inmo of course
This entire story is wasted upon the fans of Harry Potter, Avada Kedrava and no matter Witch King of Balrog dead in seconds, Crucio or Leglimency and you would have most secrets spilled open, Imperio and oh... If there is just scant 5 paragraphs dedicated to HP magic in entire 250,000 words and just name of Harry Potter is used its really leaves a bitter test in ones mouth.
Now I may be biased as Lotr is no I am very much invested in or know beyond the movies/books so to lure you in with the bait of harry & magic and do a dirty switch Roo is not really good idea, author should have posted a large all caps disclaimer at the beginning.
nevertheless credit to where its due, from lotr perspective its a beautifully written story delving quite deep into lore. It capture the shitty doom and gloom that tolkin tried to convey with his books, no matter how much you win evil is beyond defeating so much so that why the f should you bother in the first place.
the world of Rowling and Harry is even more amazing then lotrs and going with your main theme of
what most would cry out that there was no wand, Snape says, "I can teach you how to bottle fame, brew glory, and even put a stopper in death" without foolish wand waving. why o great another you choose to waste it.
I can read the hurt of true harry fans who were lured here by the false hope of good hp/lotr xover. I was beyond disappointed.
no flame please this is just me venting my anger at all the hours i wasted and emotions i had poured into this fic
this whole story seems to favor 99.99% to tolkins universe and only 0.01% of Harry with only magic i ever read here was name "Harry Potter", potions, wand, Patronus, ignis, 2 runes, mention of felix felics wasted on a pony and instant aparrarition apprentantly so evil that is should not be used in direst of emergencies.
I clear theme i get from this is that this story is not meant for harry potter fans, I have no idea why author chose HP in first place, his brilliance with words, his meticulous world building of tolkin and detail he poured in to linguistics would have much suited if he created OC character and had not tried to HP, inmo of course
This entire story is wasted upon the fans of Harry Potter, Avada Kedrava and no matter Witch King of Balrog dead in seconds, Crucio or Leglimency and you would have most secrets spilled open, Imperio and oh... If there is just scant 5 paragraphs dedicated to HP magic in entire 250,000 words and just name of Harry Potter is used its really leaves a bitter test in ones mouth.
Now I may be biased as Lotr is no I am very much invested in or know beyond the movies/books so to lure you in with the bait of harry & magic and do a dirty switch Roo is not really good idea, author should have posted a large all caps disclaimer at the beginning.
nevertheless credit to where its due, from lotr perspective its a beautifully written story delving quite deep into lore. It capture the shitty doom and gloom that tolkin tried to convey with his books, no matter how much you win evil is beyond defeating so much so that why the f should you bother in the first place.
the world of Rowling and Harry is even more amazing then lotrs and going with your main theme of
what most would cry out that there was no wand, Snape says, "I can teach you how to bottle fame, brew glory, and even put a stopper in death" without foolish wand waving. why o great another you choose to waste it.
I can read the hurt of true harry fans who were lured here by the false hope of good hp/lotr xover. I was beyond disappointed.
no flame please this is just me venting my anger at all the hours i wasted and emotions i had poured into this fic
9/21/2024 c37 Richolse
This story was amazing, it is a true shame it appears it will never be finished. I hope you find the motivation to return to it one day.
This story was amazing, it is a true shame it appears it will never be finished. I hope you find the motivation to return to it one day.
9/10/2024 c37 Stanislaus
bro this has been one of the best crossover stories on this entire app and on ao3. Hope the author is doing alright, wherever they are
bro this has been one of the best crossover stories on this entire app and on ao3. Hope the author is doing alright, wherever they are
8/28/2024 c37 MF
I Hope you continue this story the way is written is quite phenomenal. You write good battles and the emotions are well shown .
The way he choose to break the wand with blood instead of realizing his mistake by doing something foolish, quite unexpected.
I was surprised that Scathas heartstring worked and I thought he was going to meet the eagles for their feathers. But then again it goes with his experience: tortured and he claimed a part of his kill ( a dragon) , a cursed sword and the well made stuff of a afterwards fallen Maia ( if Saruman still falls BUT he wants Harry to join him would be a hit on the guts to Are lost friend )
His arc of belonging and lost is well handled ( shame we didn't see more of his journey , battles and some new people.
The cherry on top all his friendships and alliances( Celemborn , Elrod and Celembria , dwarfs etc.( I quite liked the way that 'maybe ' Darwen ( I can't pronounce it) implies subtly that Arwen likes him but our boy even Millenias old will be sick ( old habits die hard). Many kudos
I Hope you continue this story the way is written is quite phenomenal. You write good battles and the emotions are well shown .
The way he choose to break the wand with blood instead of realizing his mistake by doing something foolish, quite unexpected.
I was surprised that Scathas heartstring worked and I thought he was going to meet the eagles for their feathers. But then again it goes with his experience: tortured and he claimed a part of his kill ( a dragon) , a cursed sword and the well made stuff of a afterwards fallen Maia ( if Saruman still falls BUT he wants Harry to join him would be a hit on the guts to Are lost friend )
His arc of belonging and lost is well handled ( shame we didn't see more of his journey , battles and some new people.
The cherry on top all his friendships and alliances( Celemborn , Elrod and Celembria , dwarfs etc.( I quite liked the way that 'maybe ' Darwen ( I can't pronounce it) implies subtly that Arwen likes him but our boy even Millenias old will be sick ( old habits die hard). Many kudos
8/6/2024 c1
25Luthien'sLight
Hi there just wanted to let everyone know that the Guest reviewer beneath me needs to take their head out of their most likely unwashed ass and stop complaining like a three-year old who just discovered bad words are a thing. Story is pretty good. It’s not the best story ever, but it’s very enjoyable and centers around a character trying to figure out what they’re doing in this new place, so as such a lot of the confusion and questioning make sense. To the Guest: Shut up, you whiny little dingbat, you coward, you absolute cow-turd of a waste of human genetics. People like you make the world a worse place by your mere existence. Genuinely do us all a huge favor and never speak against, if you’re going to be a little asshole every time like you have been here.

Hi there just wanted to let everyone know that the Guest reviewer beneath me needs to take their head out of their most likely unwashed ass and stop complaining like a three-year old who just discovered bad words are a thing. Story is pretty good. It’s not the best story ever, but it’s very enjoyable and centers around a character trying to figure out what they’re doing in this new place, so as such a lot of the confusion and questioning make sense. To the Guest: Shut up, you whiny little dingbat, you coward, you absolute cow-turd of a waste of human genetics. People like you make the world a worse place by your mere existence. Genuinely do us all a huge favor and never speak against, if you’re going to be a little asshole every time like you have been here.
7/25/2024 c37 Guest
Welp looks like this got dropped and that isn't that sad of a thing. This story has been utter garbage, the writer has made Harry potter a oxygen wasting useless retarded fuck with almost 0 character growth despite having written 37 chapters that span numerous decades, DECADES, and yet Harry potter is still a pathetic little bitch after all that time. Makes the story seem like nothing but a waste if time but the time you get to the end of what's been written leaving only the thought of what the fuck was the point.
Welp looks like this got dropped and that isn't that sad of a thing. This story has been utter garbage, the writer has made Harry potter a oxygen wasting useless retarded fuck with almost 0 character growth despite having written 37 chapters that span numerous decades, DECADES, and yet Harry potter is still a pathetic little bitch after all that time. Makes the story seem like nothing but a waste if time but the time you get to the end of what's been written leaving only the thought of what the fuck was the point.