for The Shadow of Angmar3/15/2015 c1 Guest
Nice start
Nice start
3/15/2015 c1 
5plums
I liked it (though I still want more Harry in Tomb Raider-verse).
How coherent is Harry exactly here? I mean, I understand that he trusts no one at this point, and running off on his own to heal his quasi-immortal self is far more appealing than sticking with a group which may imprison him too, but is he really just wandering aimlessly without a goal? Shouldn't he bunker down somewhere and at least try and heal?
What seemed odd is how he's mentally not there enough to just wander, yet he somehow does his best impression of Neville and comes up with a miniature bomb using what I assume are the herbs he's gathered. Just didn't seem to fit with the mental image of his state of mind i was getting.
5plumsI liked it (though I still want more Harry in Tomb Raider-verse).
How coherent is Harry exactly here? I mean, I understand that he trusts no one at this point, and running off on his own to heal his quasi-immortal self is far more appealing than sticking with a group which may imprison him too, but is he really just wandering aimlessly without a goal? Shouldn't he bunker down somewhere and at least try and heal?
What seemed odd is how he's mentally not there enough to just wander, yet he somehow does his best impression of Neville and comes up with a miniature bomb using what I assume are the herbs he's gathered. Just didn't seem to fit with the mental image of his state of mind i was getting.
3/15/2015 c1 7Akitsufan
It's less verbal diarrhoea than the 'Power he knows not', much more enjoyable to read. The thousand years are going to be abridged/timeskipped?
7AkitsufanIt's less verbal diarrhoea than the 'Power he knows not', much more enjoyable to read. The thousand years are going to be abridged/timeskipped?
3/15/2015 c1 Greyjedi449t
Well done beginning to a new story and loved how you used the black speech, was a nice twist.
Looking forward to see where this story will go next chapter :)
Well done beginning to a new story and loved how you used the black speech, was a nice twist.
Looking forward to see where this story will go next chapter :)
3/15/2015 c1 1Pric3y
This is a pretty awesome first chapter! I love how he just keeps going and amazing his elven shadow. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
1Pric3yThis is a pretty awesome first chapter! I love how he just keeps going and amazing his elven shadow. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
3/15/2015 c1 TheCarpet
Holy shit. Fantastic start. I loved you other fic and hope this one is even better. I can't wait for the next chapter and where you take this story.
Holy shit. Fantastic start. I loved you other fic and hope this one is even better. I can't wait for the next chapter and where you take this story.
3/15/2015 c1 Zathol
Dam Harry's gone through hell and then some, hope he can well you know uh fix himself or something. I like how he has a unintended traveling companion and from what I can tell she won't leave until he dies? Can't even figure whats going to happen next, but can't wait to see what happens next. Exploding potions and Snape thought it was a bad thing.
Dam Harry's gone through hell and then some, hope he can well you know uh fix himself or something. I like how he has a unintended traveling companion and from what I can tell she won't leave until he dies? Can't even figure whats going to happen next, but can't wait to see what happens next. Exploding potions and Snape thought it was a bad thing.
3/15/2015 c1 1Beloved Daughter
Brilliant story already and it's just one chapter in! I cannot wait to see where you plan on taking this story. :D
1Beloved DaughterBrilliant story already and it's just one chapter in! I cannot wait to see where you plan on taking this story. :D
3/15/2015 c1 Guest
Hope Harry uses a spell or potion and rejuvenates himself
Hope Harry uses a spell or potion and rejuvenates himself
3/15/2015 c1 DefenestratedCountess
AMAZING! I loved it :)
I don't usually read stories before they have more than a few chapters up, but I really hope you see this story through!
Ps. Also love it when writers use different time periods to the hobbit and lotr movies...
AMAZING! I loved it :)
I don't usually read stories before they have more than a few chapters up, but I really hope you see this story through!
Ps. Also love it when writers use different time periods to the hobbit and lotr movies...
3/15/2015 c1 syed
I hope this harry is able to locate the palantir. It always seemed a shame they were lost. I like the idea that harry stays in the north dealing with the bad guys, going to the lost dwarf kingdoms of the grey mountains, and that place where durin awoke, the amous dwarf outpost at the top of the misty mountains.
He could go treasure hunting, raiding the hordes of dragons, trolls, goblins and orcs, bringing lost items back to the worlds. he might find the lost dwarf rings. he could cut them from the dragons that swallowed them. those rings cause the dwarfs to be greedy, and caused treasure to gather, but evventual brought dragons. The rings might cause dragons to come to harry, or him lured to their hordes.
I like the idea of harry helping to drive the necromancer from the mirkwoods, that place was originallly a elven outpost.
I hope this harry is able to locate the palantir. It always seemed a shame they were lost. I like the idea that harry stays in the north dealing with the bad guys, going to the lost dwarf kingdoms of the grey mountains, and that place where durin awoke, the amous dwarf outpost at the top of the misty mountains.
He could go treasure hunting, raiding the hordes of dragons, trolls, goblins and orcs, bringing lost items back to the worlds. he might find the lost dwarf rings. he could cut them from the dragons that swallowed them. those rings cause the dwarfs to be greedy, and caused treasure to gather, but evventual brought dragons. The rings might cause dragons to come to harry, or him lured to their hordes.
I like the idea of harry helping to drive the necromancer from the mirkwoods, that place was originallly a elven outpost.