for Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Odin Sphere Redux10/15/2024 c1 Athenii
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Chapter 1 , I'm truly impressed by its depth and richness. As a commissioned artist specializing in transforming narratives into vibrant comics, I'm eager to collaborate with you. My tailored commission package ensures your story translates seamlessly into an engaging comic, maintaining its integrity and creative vigor. I'm excited about the opportunity to work together and create something truly remarkable. Please reach out via DM, or add me on Discord at stephenamelia01, for further discussion.
4/16/2016 c4 Thermidor606
This is good, and very well put together. Shame it hasn't been updated in so long, but what can you do? one can only keep writing when you have ideas and the will to keep going.
This is good, and very well put together. Shame it hasn't been updated in so long, but what can you do? one can only keep writing when you have ideas and the will to keep going.
5/20/2015 c1 RKM
IMO, the original is more interesting than this rewrite.
IMO, the original is more interesting than this rewrite.
5/19/2015 c4 
22King of Beasts
Looks like Velvet's getting involved in a rather big way... Very interesting!
At any rate, this breather chapter's looking very good right now. Hope to see that mock combat in the next one!:D
- K.O.B
22King of BeastsLooks like Velvet's getting involved in a rather big way... Very interesting!
At any rate, this breather chapter's looking very good right now. Hope to see that mock combat in the next one!:D
- K.O.B
5/19/2015 c4 3MWkillkenny84
Velvet, is that you?
If so, where is your Pooka of an husband?
Because I think your (former) in-law will want to meet his only cousin.
Vote: 10
3MWkillkenny84Velvet, is that you?
If so, where is your Pooka of an husband?
Because I think your (former) in-law will want to meet his only cousin.
Vote: 10
4/15/2015 c3 22King of Beasts
Enforcer Valentine...if that is who I think this is, then this ought to be fun!xD
Nice job with this chapter. The story's looking pretty good so far, and the fact that the Book ate some of Belderiver's power means that things do not look good. All in all, more to look forward to!
- K.O.B
22King of BeastsEnforcer Valentine...if that is who I think this is, then this ought to be fun!xD
Nice job with this chapter. The story's looking pretty good so far, and the fact that the Book ate some of Belderiver's power means that things do not look good. All in all, more to look forward to!
- K.O.B
4/15/2015 c3 3MWkillkenny84
Good, good...
The Book has absorbed some of Belderiver's power?
Oh [BEEP]!
... Enforcer VALENTINE?
Any relationship with the siblings from Odin Sphere (Ingway and Velvet)?
Vote: 10
3MWkillkenny84Good, good...
The Book has absorbed some of Belderiver's power?
Oh [BEEP]!
... Enforcer VALENTINE?
Any relationship with the siblings from Odin Sphere (Ingway and Velvet)?
Vote: 10
4/2/2015 c2 3asdljkghaklsdghkajshdlkjhalkhd
I do you like this chapter, but there is one thing I must point out: in the Nanoha series, the majority of mages cannot fly. True flight spells are a relatively rare talent, despite what it shows in the show.
3asdljkghaklsdghkajshdlkjhalkhdI do you like this chapter, but there is one thing I must point out: in the Nanoha series, the majority of mages cannot fly. True flight spells are a relatively rare talent, despite what it shows in the show.