for Breaking Away11/30/2018 c30 Guest
Excellent! I thoroughly enjoyed the way Rick was clever, insightful, capable and more than an equal with Kate, Espo, Kevin and the FBI. Kate was nicely written as well. More, please, but if not, it was a great pleasure to read your story. I was immersed in your version of the Castle world and you made me love the characters more (if that is even possible)! Loved it!
Excellent! I thoroughly enjoyed the way Rick was clever, insightful, capable and more than an equal with Kate, Espo, Kevin and the FBI. Kate was nicely written as well. More, please, but if not, it was a great pleasure to read your story. I was immersed in your version of the Castle world and you made me love the characters more (if that is even possible)! Loved it!
3/19/2018 c30 bponder
After reading update on under new management, decided to reread these two stories. I love how you always paint Castle as a strong character worthy of respect. These two stories underline what could have been done in the series.
After reading update on under new management, decided to reread these two stories. I love how you always paint Castle as a strong character worthy of respect. These two stories underline what could have been done in the series.
9/5/2017 c30 helensorrento
Great story! I don't think you have to figure your creative writing thing.I think you have it down.
Great story! I don't think you have to figure your creative writing thing.I think you have it down.
5/2/2017 c30 Castlelover777
Another amazing story! The main trait that I have found in your stories (other than being extremely entertaining) is how well they are put together. There doesn't ever seem to be any extraneous material. Whether it's action or emotion, I never feel like I want to skip ahead. That's a pretty impressive feat in a 30 chapter story. You have original ideas, and take my beloved characters in new directions without it ever feeling false. I'm just so thankful for those who are still writing Castle fic, because it never fails to make my days better. So, thank you.
Another amazing story! The main trait that I have found in your stories (other than being extremely entertaining) is how well they are put together. There doesn't ever seem to be any extraneous material. Whether it's action or emotion, I never feel like I want to skip ahead. That's a pretty impressive feat in a 30 chapter story. You have original ideas, and take my beloved characters in new directions without it ever feeling false. I'm just so thankful for those who are still writing Castle fic, because it never fails to make my days better. So, thank you.
4/4/2017 c30 
19wendykw
Loved, loved, loved this story. Sorry, I didn't review as I went through. I was so wrapped up in it, that I didn't want to stop and review.
19wendykwLoved, loved, loved this story. Sorry, I didn't review as I went through. I was so wrapped up in it, that I didn't want to stop and review.
3/19/2017 c30 tanyapotter
You've done a wonderful job with this storyline. Will have to go back and leave an “awesome” on Just Along for the Ride. I've been captivated. Thank you.
You've done a wonderful job with this storyline. Will have to go back and leave an “awesome” on Just Along for the Ride. I've been captivated. Thank you.
2/16/2017 c30 aussiecate
Bravo for this terrific story. I think overall you achieved your goals as Caskett in particular forged a real relationship, full of equal parts drama, humour and love. You also brought their surrounding family and colleagues perfectly into the mix, so hats off to you.
Thanks again :)
Bravo for this terrific story. I think overall you achieved your goals as Caskett in particular forged a real relationship, full of equal parts drama, humour and love. You also brought their surrounding family and colleagues perfectly into the mix, so hats off to you.
Thanks again :)
2/16/2017 c29 aussiecate
Oh poor Kate, no wonder she's a little more green eyed than usual! That said, those moments allowed that sweet scene in the helicopter; awwwww. I thought for a moment you had let Bracken get away, eek! Onto the final chapter.
Oh poor Kate, no wonder she's a little more green eyed than usual! That said, those moments allowed that sweet scene in the helicopter; awwwww. I thought for a moment you had let Bracken get away, eek! Onto the final chapter.
2/13/2017 c28 aussiecate
Oh! I wasn't expecting someone to make off with Rick! Poor luv, being tossed from pillar to post and back again :( You did make me laugh with Kate's way to prove Rick is crazy :) No surprise Bracken would run the weasel, nor Simmons for that matter.
Oh! I wasn't expecting someone to make off with Rick! Poor luv, being tossed from pillar to post and back again :( You did make me laugh with Kate's way to prove Rick is crazy :) No surprise Bracken would run the weasel, nor Simmons for that matter.
2/12/2017 c27 aussiecate
Well I'm glad Jim was happy k in the end and that Dani was a good soul underneath!
Well I'm glad Jim was happy k in the end and that Dani was a good soul underneath!
2/11/2017 c26 aussiecate
Finally I have a moment to keep reading! Yep, there was a lot of setup in this chapter but it was necessary to launch the last part of the story. I just hope Jim is ok.
Finally I have a moment to keep reading! Yep, there was a lot of setup in this chapter but it was necessary to launch the last part of the story. I just hope Jim is ok.
2/5/2017 c25 aussiecate
Rick's convo with Bob was illuminating, as was Kate's with Gates. You certainly had fun with Paula!
Rick's convo with Bob was illuminating, as was Kate's with Gates. You certainly had fun with Paula!
2/4/2017 c24 aussiecate
Oh my that got nasty! To think went thru all of that to keep Bob talking and now he wants to see if he can be redeemed. I'm not sure Kate will give Bob a chance after his betrayal of Rick though, and I don't blame her one bit for that.
Oh my that got nasty! To think went thru all of that to keep Bob talking and now he wants to see if he can be redeemed. I'm not sure Kate will give Bob a chance after his betrayal of Rick though, and I don't blame her one bit for that.