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19Smiling Seshat
You need to give your story a summary, or else no one will read it. Saying 'summary is inside the story' is useless, because people judge your story based on its summary, which is why you need to post something to tell us what it's about.
Also, chapters should be at least 1000 words long (AN does not count), or nobody will read this. You need long chapters, and a proper summary.
You have four chapters that together give you 1.9K words. You should just glue them together into one chapter, and it would be much better.
19Smiling SeshatYou need to give your story a summary, or else no one will read it. Saying 'summary is inside the story' is useless, because people judge your story based on its summary, which is why you need to post something to tell us what it's about.
Also, chapters should be at least 1000 words long (AN does not count), or nobody will read this. You need long chapters, and a proper summary.
You have four chapters that together give you 1.9K words. You should just glue them together into one chapter, and it would be much better.