for Blue Flames DxD8/27/2020 c1 Mamawebo
Cabeza de pinga imbécil
Cabeza de pinga imbécil
7/28/2020 c6 Onion-00
i expected rin to be atleast past high-class ranking,but for a son of satan? To lack so much power but come from the most op lineage and be the main character?Rin is cheep shit
i expected rin to be atleast past high-class ranking,but for a son of satan? To lack so much power but come from the most op lineage and be the main character?Rin is cheep shit
7/19/2019 c1 Donit
So I'm sitting here like-
"Ah, I have watched both series and read Blue Exorcist. This should be... interesting. Heheh."
So I'm sitting here like-
"Ah, I have watched both series and read Blue Exorcist. This should be... interesting. Heheh."
6/21/2019 c6 adis
Yep, I'm done with this. Your bad grammar has infected your entire writing. This piled on with your cringy attacks and crap are way too much for me to continue reading this crap.
Yep, I'm done with this. Your bad grammar has infected your entire writing. This piled on with your cringy attacks and crap are way too much for me to continue reading this crap.
6/21/2019 c5 adis
I don't even understand it. Are you not a native speaker? It's not possible for your grammar mistakes to be so specific on what they affect. The only times it happens is when you say an idiom or during dialogue. HOW? You have perfect scene descriptions and tone then as soon as you say some dialogue or a "saying" (that's basically what an idiom is) it just falls apart. I have literally not seen a different type of grammar mistake.
I don't even understand it. Are you not a native speaker? It's not possible for your grammar mistakes to be so specific on what they affect. The only times it happens is when you say an idiom or during dialogue. HOW? You have perfect scene descriptions and tone then as soon as you say some dialogue or a "saying" (that's basically what an idiom is) it just falls apart. I have literally not seen a different type of grammar mistake.
6/21/2019 c4 adis
Okay, the grammar was acceptable up until this chapter. I am still going to read it but this is fucking ridiculous. I feel like I am reading a 4th graders writing.
Okay, the grammar was acceptable up until this chapter. I am still going to read it but this is fucking ridiculous. I feel like I am reading a 4th graders writing.
6/4/2019 c6 
2Hoppy854
I half want Rin to be much stronger, since he’s technically the son of Satan...
2Hoppy854I half want Rin to be much stronger, since he’s technically the son of Satan...
10/5/2018 c1 Guest
Fav? No thanks even if I have an account.
Fav? No thanks even if I have an account.
9/11/2018 c6 rin
fuck
fuck
9/11/2018 c3 rin
omg
omg
6/7/2018 c1 1AniMeOtaKuKiNg
I do really want to read this story but oneself pov is kinda irritated me. I don't like it a bit. Another thing is I don't like how you put an oc in this story. I would prefer if Rin doesn't have any servants and live in human world, hiding from supernatural beings and let all of devil in that world find out his existence by theirself instead of been informed of his coming to their universe. But what I can say, this is your story not mine. I would leave now. Maybe if I do have mood to read this story again I would stop by and continue to reading this story again. Tata
1AniMeOtaKuKiNgI do really want to read this story but oneself pov is kinda irritated me. I don't like it a bit. Another thing is I don't like how you put an oc in this story. I would prefer if Rin doesn't have any servants and live in human world, hiding from supernatural beings and let all of devil in that world find out his existence by theirself instead of been informed of his coming to their universe. But what I can say, this is your story not mine. I would leave now. Maybe if I do have mood to read this story again I would stop by and continue to reading this story again. Tata
5/13/2018 c1 Guest
(._.) Imagine this fic written in the form of a manga, with all the pictures drawn and etc.
This is what you call shit writing.
(._.) Imagine this fic written in the form of a manga, with all the pictures drawn and etc.
This is what you call shit writing.
4/8/2018 c6 Guest
realy rin could solo them no problem
realy rin could solo them no problem