for Where our paths once met3/18/2015 c1 TooLazyToLogin
I find this story quite interesting.
However some things seem a bit illogical to me...
1) Shouldn't kuroko at least be seated on a wheelchair? If I am someone who had lost their legs I'll want to be able to move around easier by myself if possible so I won't inconvenience other people.
2) Kuroko must have very strong muscular arms if he is able to move around like that without crutches or a wheelchair. While this shows Kuroko as a determined character, it doesn't make sense if he has low stamina as he normally do in the original (unless of course you decided he has a huge stamina because of doing something like this for a long time. That means he's used to this since he's a child. How old is Kuroko by the way?)
3) if not a wheelchair then at least should he be wearing fake legs? (though they may be more expensive than a wheelchair...) shouldn't his parents be able to afford something for him?
It'll be great if you can continue this story while thinking about the above queries, I just find it illogical that kuroko's original parents (or current ones if he was neglected by his original ones in the past) didn't try to give him easier mobility.
Also, while us fans know that tetsuya nigou is a dog, it's strange that Kise asked if Tetsu is a dog instead of a pet. If he didn't know if Tetsu was a human or animal, then how is he able to know Tetsu is a dog and not a cat or something else? Wouldn't one ask what kind their pet is? Not a major thing, just something I find odd but not really an issue. Maybe the others won't notice.
I'd like to know how Akashi fell for this Kuroko, looking forward to it ;)
I find this story quite interesting.
However some things seem a bit illogical to me...
1) Shouldn't kuroko at least be seated on a wheelchair? If I am someone who had lost their legs I'll want to be able to move around easier by myself if possible so I won't inconvenience other people.
2) Kuroko must have very strong muscular arms if he is able to move around like that without crutches or a wheelchair. While this shows Kuroko as a determined character, it doesn't make sense if he has low stamina as he normally do in the original (unless of course you decided he has a huge stamina because of doing something like this for a long time. That means he's used to this since he's a child. How old is Kuroko by the way?)
3) if not a wheelchair then at least should he be wearing fake legs? (though they may be more expensive than a wheelchair...) shouldn't his parents be able to afford something for him?
It'll be great if you can continue this story while thinking about the above queries, I just find it illogical that kuroko's original parents (or current ones if he was neglected by his original ones in the past) didn't try to give him easier mobility.
Also, while us fans know that tetsuya nigou is a dog, it's strange that Kise asked if Tetsu is a dog instead of a pet. If he didn't know if Tetsu was a human or animal, then how is he able to know Tetsu is a dog and not a cat or something else? Wouldn't one ask what kind their pet is? Not a major thing, just something I find odd but not really an issue. Maybe the others won't notice.
I'd like to know how Akashi fell for this Kuroko, looking forward to it ;)
3/18/2015 c1 Shadow Carnival
I feel bad saying this, but I love this story. The prologue was actually very good in my opinion. I don't want to sound like a person who enjoys seeing others in pain, or with disabilities, but I love the little twist at the end, where Kuroko is legless. But I have to ask, does Kuroko have a wheelchair or some type of prosthetic. Please update soon. :3 -shadow carnival
I feel bad saying this, but I love this story. The prologue was actually very good in my opinion. I don't want to sound like a person who enjoys seeing others in pain, or with disabilities, but I love the little twist at the end, where Kuroko is legless. But I have to ask, does Kuroko have a wheelchair or some type of prosthetic. Please update soon. :3 -shadow carnival
3/17/2015 c1 ShinseiShinwa
OMG WHAT KUROKO YOU HAVE NO (won't spoil if some people read the review) NOOOO! I wonder what's going to happen next!?
OMG WHAT KUROKO YOU HAVE NO (won't spoil if some people read the review) NOOOO! I wonder what's going to happen next!?
3/17/2015 c1 
6Takucchi
Oooh, s'been quite a while since a fic sparked my interest. It's a very nice start, I could almost see the upcoming tears, fluff and feels.
I look forward to your fic's development. Kudos, dearie
6TakucchiOooh, s'been quite a while since a fic sparked my interest. It's a very nice start, I could almost see the upcoming tears, fluff and feels.
I look forward to your fic's development. Kudos, dearie
3/17/2015 c1 Guest
This sounds intresting, and child!kuroko always hits me right here, in the heart.
This sounds intresting, and child!kuroko always hits me right here, in the heart.
3/16/2015 c1 Guest
csd here and wah! this is amazing! This is a new concept that no one has thought of! I hope you can continue when you can.
csd here and wah! this is amazing! This is a new concept that no one has thought of! I hope you can continue when you can.
3/16/2015 c1 Another observer of the world
The story is interesting and your composition is very good.
Still I have a question and a request. First is Kuro actually younger than Ao ? Second it's not tht I don't like the story as I said is super interesting but instead of legless can't you make him paralyzed ? I don't like the image of someone without legs and paralyzed can mean the same - can't move.
Good Luck !
The story is interesting and your composition is very good.
Still I have a question and a request. First is Kuro actually younger than Ao ? Second it's not tht I don't like the story as I said is super interesting but instead of legless can't you make him paralyzed ? I don't like the image of someone without legs and paralyzed can mean the same - can't move.
Good Luck !