for A Summer Beating3/17/2015 c1 
14MooseTalk
Oh my gawsh. Mouse this was great! mean poor Kili, but of course, protective brother comes in for the rescue. Gotta love Fili. *-* I'm surprised this was your first whump by how good it was.
PS: The title is fabulous.
14MooseTalkOh my gawsh. Mouse this was great! mean poor Kili, but of course, protective brother comes in for the rescue. Gotta love Fili. *-* I'm surprised this was your first whump by how good it was.
PS: The title is fabulous.
3/16/2015 c1 7Stardurin1217
It wasn't bad at all :)
The only thing I would do is put their ages, I thought maybe he was older until you wrote that Fili carried him which makes me wonder how old they really were.
This was a really cute story and I will look forward to seeing other stuff :)
7Stardurin1217It wasn't bad at all :)
The only thing I would do is put their ages, I thought maybe he was older until you wrote that Fili carried him which makes me wonder how old they really were.
This was a really cute story and I will look forward to seeing other stuff :)
3/16/2015 c1 5Celebrisilweth
I liked tenacious, scrappy Kili, and, of course, Fili came to save the day.
5CelebrisilwethI liked tenacious, scrappy Kili, and, of course, Fili came to save the day.