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3/23/2015 c2 Guest
Great chapter keep it up and don't lose heart to much cause some people (myself sometimes included) won't even look at a story unless it has 20k words or so
3/23/2015 c2 5War Sage
Great chapter wonder what will happen next
3/17/2015 c1 Guest
Great story its all there it's got an oc it has a unique setting and your writing style is good easy to understand and so far the plot seems cool. However there are two pitfalls for you to make it over , firstly to be successful at first you need to update fairly regularly and this has killed a lot of fics e.g reduced mass great until the updates started to dry up and also don't make some super weird messed up plot decision that destroys everything the story has built up e.g surviving in mass effect where the character baisicly losses his mind and so on. But avoid those and you should be successful.
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