
1/30 c32 guest
Will Onyx return?
Will Onyx return?
4/25/2017 c32 Guest
I love this story keep on going with story friend
I love this story keep on going with story friend
4/20/2017 c1 ShadowBlade
lol
OC vs Character
jasper: oh look two weak humans, and just another waste of my time,
Nero:*pulls out his sword* jasper you murdering son of a bitch you killed my dad
Vector leonhart: *pulls out his gunblade* nero calm down alright were gonna take her down together,
jasper: hmph that's what you think, * pulls out nero's fathers sword and summons her helmet,
Nero: that sword belongs to my father and i'm gonna take it from you,
jasper: come and get it then if you can *chuckles*
to be continue
lol
OC vs Character
jasper: oh look two weak humans, and just another waste of my time,
Nero:*pulls out his sword* jasper you murdering son of a bitch you killed my dad
Vector leonhart: *pulls out his gunblade* nero calm down alright were gonna take her down together,
jasper: hmph that's what you think, * pulls out nero's fathers sword and summons her helmet,
Nero: that sword belongs to my father and i'm gonna take it from you,
jasper: come and get it then if you can *chuckles*
to be continue
1/31/2017 c1 samuseexocist
i like it
i like it
9/19/2016 c2 bigDxx
cool lol
cool lol
8/19/2016 c31 Guest
Sequel sequel sequel!
Sequel sequel sequel!
8/17/2016 c2 gemmaster777
I like your idea of how onyx wold look. I hope you reference many more episodes, and am a Steven x Connie fan so I also hope you include plenty of her.
I like your idea of how onyx wold look. I hope you reference many more episodes, and am a Steven x Connie fan so I also hope you include plenty of her.
8/13/2016 c31
7The Unkown Violinist
His entire story. It was perfect. I... wow. I can't say anything about it that's translatable. That's how good it was, it was the best fanfi . Can't wait for the sequel, and see what happens next! Btw, I remember you said you might have used my OC's for this? I hope it's true! But anyways, good job! Goodby- no. I'm not gonna say goodbye, I'm gonna say what would fit you the best. STAY BEAUTIFUL!

His entire story. It was perfect. I... wow. I can't say anything about it that's translatable. That's how good it was, it was the best fanfi . Can't wait for the sequel, and see what happens next! Btw, I remember you said you might have used my OC's for this? I hope it's true! But anyways, good job! Goodby- no. I'm not gonna say goodbye, I'm gonna say what would fit you the best. STAY BEAUTIFUL!
1/28/2016 c8 carbonaceousAnomura
[before reading chapter]
*so, "the talk," huh ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
[after reading chapter]
*;-;
[before reading chapter]
*so, "the talk," huh ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)
[after reading chapter]
*;-;