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8/18 c14 Guest
Great story hope you continue
8/16 c7 Ur mom
yo clever i would have never thought
8/10 c2 StarBoundDisaster
Couldn't finish the chapter. I thought you were writing someone mature? Not a god damn retard.
8/9 c14 Zoo hi dghf
This is a pretty good story
8/8 c14 Yuri
There are three possibilities to how you wrote this; you're either a father who lost both kids and wanted to use this story as a way to clear his mind and deal with grief-can be evidenced by your age on your profile, or you're a genius at writing who should be pumping out original works, or you're a psychopath, I can't see it going any way else
7/29 c3 ThanosSnappin
You can’t really call your mc a ‘monster’ when he starts crying to a corpse over actions he hasn’t even done:

"YOU SHOVED A FUCKING CHIDORI THROUGH HER
CHEST YOU PRICK! THAT'S WHAT! YOU TORE A FIST-SIZED HOLE IN NARUTO'S CHEST! MY FRIEND'S FREAKING CHEST! DID YOU THINK I'D JUST SIT BACK AND LET YOU GET AWAY WITH IT!MC to a 9 year old Sasuke, who hasn’t even hurt any people yet.

OOH WHAT A DEVIL! SHIVER ME TIMBERS!

When you give the mc a romantic relationship, you calling him a monster will be even funnier.
7/26 c14 Skywolf99
this was a really good fic, shame it's been 2 years since an update. i hope you'll get back to this someday soon
7/25 c4 mhihabak
bruh didn't you say naruto sucked at the clone jutsu so that's why you're teaching her the shadow clone but at the beginning of the chapter a clone of Naruto came to you to ask for help before Hanabi tackled him that's a loophole right there
7/25 c3 mhihabak
look am all for changing the plot and all that but i got to admit this is stupid the only real thing he gains from killing Sasuke is that his knowledge of the future becomes useless i mean Orochimaru might not attack Konoha because of the Sharingan but he will attack it nonetheless and now you won't know how he will do it and so what if Sasuke chidoried naruto he managed to live through so why bother with killing him for it and then there is the fact that Sasuke, whether you like it or not saved the world when he reanimated the hokages with Orochimaru in the war arc and helped naruto defeat Kaguya so killing him just because you didn't like him, is stupid
7/25 c2 mhihabak
bro wtf, not even a chapter ago you said that the mc won't have a hero complex and sh*t he won't just help every f*cker he runs into but the moment he sees naruto he turns into a f*cking marshmallow like seriously what the hell am not annoyed he did it (ok that's a lie I am a little annoyed, he had no reason too, that was just f*cking stupid) what annoys me is you said he is going to be evil and only care for himself and those close to him and then just one chapter later your making him lose his sh*t over someone he just met your not a weeb in his teens whos life is all about naruto your an old man who knows that the world isn't all sunshine and rainbows so seeing someone hiding their feeling isn't something that would get such a reaction from you
7/24 c6 akqle
BEST. FIC. EVER.
7/24 c5 akqle
honestly this feels like a Crack fic and I love it
7/16 c14 SgtSmelly
I rarely post reviews regarding stories, but this fic compelled me to because of how well written it is. I don’t want to say much out of fear for revealing too much of the plot, but I can wholeheartedly say that the a author is up to par with the best of the best when it comes to writing as a whole.
7/5 c5 1realfan16
Ignoring fem Naruto (yes I'll bitch about it for as long as possible. sue me!) absolutely marvellous. yes kishi nerfed Kakashi so much it doesn't make sense. He is supposed to have a 1000 jutsus scratch that even 10 in his arsenal...yet all the justus i credit him come from the various Naruto games i played. A genius like no other and he gets trounced left and right under the flimsy excuse of sharingan taking too much chakra.. the last hurdle to convince me this fic is worth calling a master piece would be how you deal with the bijuus and their power. Kishi nerfed them so much even the game didn't do them justice. My personal worst the SIX tailed slug,slimy, giant and all it can do...BLOW BUBBLES them being explosive isn't even worth mentioning. #stress whenever i think too seriously about kishi and his version of power.
7/5 c6 realfan16
i call animal abuse
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