
1/28 c2 Guest
The MC is acting with no sense. I don't even know why you added a tragic past where he was a father and was killed by his own son. When you add something it's to make an impact. "He's a grown man and thanks to that he learns quickly" so far so good, but if he really is an adult who even had children, he wouldn't go and punch a 6 year old in the face just for events that haven't happened yet, in fact, he even admits that Kisihimoto edited amd invented events, so he shouldn't assume that Sasuke is how he thinks he is. Aside from the fact that it's impossible for him to see it coming with his great intelligence that his actions have consequences, even more so when he knows that Itachi killed his own family to keep his brother safe.
It would have been better if you didn't even mention that past or say that he's a very old man, since after all he doesn't live up to what you say he is. At least make it make a little sense by changing the past or erasing it completely.
The MC is acting with no sense. I don't even know why you added a tragic past where he was a father and was killed by his own son. When you add something it's to make an impact. "He's a grown man and thanks to that he learns quickly" so far so good, but if he really is an adult who even had children, he wouldn't go and punch a 6 year old in the face just for events that haven't happened yet, in fact, he even admits that Kisihimoto edited amd invented events, so he shouldn't assume that Sasuke is how he thinks he is. Aside from the fact that it's impossible for him to see it coming with his great intelligence that his actions have consequences, even more so when he knows that Itachi killed his own family to keep his brother safe.
It would have been better if you didn't even mention that past or say that he's a very old man, since after all he doesn't live up to what you say he is. At least make it make a little sense by changing the past or erasing it completely.
1/28 c3
2Lil Author Vert
I don't hate him or like him, he's just a lil cringe. Like chill out bro you doin entirely too much

I don't hate him or like him, he's just a lil cringe. Like chill out bro you doin entirely too much
1/6 c14 Orcadius
Damn. They can't leave me like this, I'm an addict. 5 years is too long please. I NEED MY DOSE. PLS UPDATE
Damn. They can't leave me like this, I'm an addict. 5 years is too long please. I NEED MY DOSE. PLS UPDATE
1/6 c8 Orcadius
I'm going to cry as much as I did with this chapter, as if I found out that they no longer update... beautiful.
I'm going to cry as much as I did with this chapter, as if I found out that they no longer update... beautiful.
12/31/2024 c12 alsdjhfgljkwebgh
Hope you're still around just so you keep seeing everyone call you a retard
Hope you're still around just so you keep seeing everyone call you a retard
11/8/2024 c2 Guest
Why does bro even want rinnegan its from hagaromo who really isnt related to the hyuuga he should want the tenseigan its the rinnegan of the byakugan and cool looking
Why does bro even want rinnegan its from hagaromo who really isnt related to the hyuuga he should want the tenseigan its the rinnegan of the byakugan and cool looking
10/12/2024 c2 Sokarun
what does the mc expect naruto to do? cry and bitch about his life? also what normal person would go about punching a child in the face just bc they're happy that's legitimately stupid i thought that the mc was a father in his 40s and a decent person but judging from how he treats naruto im starting to see why his son killed him
what does the mc expect naruto to do? cry and bitch about his life? also what normal person would go about punching a child in the face just bc they're happy that's legitimately stupid i thought that the mc was a father in his 40s and a decent person but judging from how he treats naruto im starting to see why his son killed him
10/12/2024 c1 Sokarun
ok so nevermind i scrolled down and realized that it's gonna be a flashback that fills us in
ok so nevermind i scrolled down and realized that it's gonna be a flashback that fills us in
10/12/2024 c1 Sokarun
okay so is it just me or is there a chapter thats supposed to go before this one cus the whole thing looks kinda weird
okay so is it just me or is there a chapter thats supposed to go before this one cus the whole thing looks kinda weird