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6/11/2023 c5 KingOfEmptyness
this fic is not really working for me, its not you see but the plot and genderbend weirdness with it "trying" to be a humor fic its not doing it for me, and still trying to say this was "the actual canon oh they were nerfed and misgendered" that's just too smells like shikamuru says its BULLSHİT so away i go
6/11/2023 c4 KingOfEmptyness
for :What big clue at the beginning, the weird ass dream. kaguya doesn't have rinnegan btw she has the weird forehead eye and isn't all that powerful since you know she lost, or he because you are bastard and i don't trust your genders anymore

for :is he just going to ignore the part about indra being his "DİRECT fucking DESCENDANT" did he fucked the sage of six paths that you probably turned into a female for some bastardly reason
6/11/2023 c3 KingOfEmptyness
how would anyone think that naruto being a girl would make sense with canon, it doesn't even make sense in your story
6/11/2023 c2 KingOfEmptyness
you really should put a genderbend warning, its a turnoff for me. at least you don't seem like you will romance the genderbends so ill stay to read not that you would care but here im still writing this
5/23/2023 c11 3Obsidian Pegasus
This is, honestly, EASILY, hands down the best take on Danzo Shimura that I have ever seen.
Honestly, I'd probably have taken that offer. If it was canon Root then no, but this version of Danzo simply makes it clear that he's one of the best paths Hikaru would have to becoming insanely powerful in a short time, which is kind of a necessity because Obito and Zetsu and Kaguya and all those.
(although yeah, considering that, I'd probably be suckered into the deal and come out a very different person in the end, though whether that's bad if good is debatable.)
You got plans on finishing this? Like, if not, how about a synopsis on your plans on how you want the story to go? I know there's plenty of haters (idiots), but the quality of the story, regardless of whatever people have to say about Hikaru's character, does indeed speak for itself.
5/21/2023 c1 Guest
I can’t even begin to comprehend how horrible of an MC you have written. He’s a man stuck in a child’s body, but is more immature than Naruto himself. First thing he does when spots both Naruto and Sasuke? Punches them in the face for no reason. As a man, as an adult, he should have a better hold on his emotions but instead he acts like a child. Disgusting behaviour from an adult, I don’t know how he isn’t disgusted at himself. I can’t stand reading about such an immature ‘adult’. It’d be fine if he was a child, children are immature after all, but an adult? Doing the things he does? He’s a man-child that likely never moved out of his mum’s basement in his previous life
5/19/2023 c3 1huongdaoroma
Jesus Christ, the MC is really ambitious!
5/11/2023 c14 alsdjhfgljkwebgh
It really is such a shame that you were too stupid to finish this amazing story.
5/11/2023 c10 alsdjhfgljkwebgh
Wow, what a brain dead and unneeded chapter. Guess you were showing signs of being too stupid and brain dead to finish this story early, huh?
5/7/2023 c7 ChronoMitsurugi
New love actually makes perfect sense for a mother and child. As for them showing up at weddings i can believe it might have started as a well wishes meaning for a healthy pregnancy leading to healthy children hence new love between the mother and child.
How true that is, i wouldnt know. But its a nice headcanon.
4/25/2023 c14 Guest
I still believe you'll continue this someday.
4/20/2023 c14 1OdinAUT
Sad that I once again finished this story. I swear its one of the best ones out there. I really hope you start writing again someday :) BTW your take on Danzo is, bar none, the best I have ever seen in any fanfic.
4/11/2023 c2 Guest
Yeah this was dropped as soon as he started to fan boy so cringe
4/2/2023 c12 Rayenyen
Is thisblink motherf*ckerreference?
3/31/2023 c1 1Omnireceptacle
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