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6/30/2021 c4 1TBread81
I love it hope someday that we get more
3/25/2020 c4 the-loststone
I like the adoption story line. It makes sense to me that she would want them away from charming and the criminal lifestyle. If she thought they would be adopted by a stable family I think she would have done it. Based on s1, Gemma was really hostile and encouraged Jax to be part of the club, probably stopping/discouraging him from leaving with her when she went to college. So she would have tried to ensure her kids weren't part of that life, even if they weren't with her.

So does Gracie need like a transplant or something...?

Hope you come back to this
4/11/2019 c4 Yo
I am thinking u should keep the adoption storyline tbh
2/26/2019 c4 Entermagicalrealms
Hey I really liked the start of this story! I would love to read your rewrite. I think you should keep the adoption story line. I really like it!
12/30/2018 c4 Lexxxloubell
You should have it so that she gives birth before leaving.
11/18/2018 c4 yo
I think you should keep the adoption storyline.
10/4/2018 c4 7ms. Jaicee lee
I think you should stick with the San Diego adoption side it will offer up some interesting angsty scenes. I love the story so far though.
10/2/2018 c4 BohemianBlues
I think Tara having attempted to have the twins adopted provides an even more interesting storyline. I would like to see the twins at the current age you’re portraying them. Maybe there appearance could take place further into the shows storyline. Otherwise, maybe having them be younger would work better if you’restarting the story based on the events of season 1.

I can’t wait to see what you have next for!
9/24/2018 c4 llegacy
Have Tara keep them but make them a bit younger.. can't wait to read the new story..
9/17/2018 c4 Guest
Definitely think that you should keep Jax’s in the dark about the twins, that way it’ll keep the drama.
9/16/2018 c4 emma217
So far everything Sounds good. Them being put up for adoption gives it some drama with jax finding out hopefully you continue it
9/12/2018 c4 debra.joines
Can’t wait for the rewrite I think you should have Tara keeping them instead of putting them up for adoption
9/9/2018 c4 Storybrooketofrasersridge
You should definitely have Tara keep them and her finish medical school oh maybe make them younger.
9/9/2018 c4 Guest
Have Tara keep them and maybe they should be like 10-11 years old instead :))
9/9/2018 c4 1SOALOVEATL
I like the story the way it is, but think maybe have her come back to charming after her 8 years of school and maybe like 3 years of residency. Let the kids be around 10 or 11 and she finds out that they were never adopted and goes to find them.
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