for The Tok'ra Queen
13/22/2015 c2 Guest
Very good, loved
Very good, loved
3/22/2015 c2 ElldenStorm
Enjoyed reading thus far! Great intro with a lot of potential! Can't wait to see what's to come and I seriously hope she takes the Magical World by the horns and starts beating them to death! I've always found the magical world beyond ridiculous and downright offensive!
I hope you plan to have her befriend Harry. Harry Potter has always been the story of Harry and Hermione in my eyes, with the idiot side-kick Weasley.
Really rooting for a H/Hr! I could see Harry being her ideal champion / protector once he's trained up and her mate! After all, a Tok'ra partner is a no-no with the whole Harcesis deal. And having a human companion for Hermione would be more in line with the whole Symbiotic aspect of being Tok'ra and not limiting their host's and their lives! In both aspects as Hermione and Egeria, she can have her family both Tok'ra and human. But whatever you do, don't involve Ron. He will not be understanding.
I especially appreciate Egeria seeking to uplift Earth! It's a sound strategy. The Harry Potter saga wraps up in 1998 right about the time the Stargate Program goes active. Getting her involved from the very beginning as a leading scientific authority on the level of Samantha Carter. She can do a hell of a lot of good uplifting Earth sooner and revealing herself to Jolinar in the beginning of Season 2! It's a perfect strategy after all! With Earth providing the muscle with their developed Industrialized Military, and the Tok'ra providing the eyes and ears of Earth with their intelligence, espionage and sabotage campaign as well as their technical knowledge and advanced sciences! It really is sad that the Tok'ra didn't take advantage of the possibilities in the show. The two races are so made for complimenting one another!
Looking forward to more!
Enjoyed reading thus far! Great intro with a lot of potential! Can't wait to see what's to come and I seriously hope she takes the Magical World by the horns and starts beating them to death! I've always found the magical world beyond ridiculous and downright offensive!
I hope you plan to have her befriend Harry. Harry Potter has always been the story of Harry and Hermione in my eyes, with the idiot side-kick Weasley.
Really rooting for a H/Hr! I could see Harry being her ideal champion / protector once he's trained up and her mate! After all, a Tok'ra partner is a no-no with the whole Harcesis deal. And having a human companion for Hermione would be more in line with the whole Symbiotic aspect of being Tok'ra and not limiting their host's and their lives! In both aspects as Hermione and Egeria, she can have her family both Tok'ra and human. But whatever you do, don't involve Ron. He will not be understanding.
I especially appreciate Egeria seeking to uplift Earth! It's a sound strategy. The Harry Potter saga wraps up in 1998 right about the time the Stargate Program goes active. Getting her involved from the very beginning as a leading scientific authority on the level of Samantha Carter. She can do a hell of a lot of good uplifting Earth sooner and revealing herself to Jolinar in the beginning of Season 2! It's a perfect strategy after all! With Earth providing the muscle with their developed Industrialized Military, and the Tok'ra providing the eyes and ears of Earth with their intelligence, espionage and sabotage campaign as well as their technical knowledge and advanced sciences! It really is sad that the Tok'ra didn't take advantage of the possibilities in the show. The two races are so made for complimenting one another!
Looking forward to more!
3/22/2015 c2 celf
nice chapter,
i hope to read more soon,
posting ever week would be nice. but it sound more like it will be ever 10 days?
well if Hermione and harry become friends will she let harry in and tell him about her true life?
how long before she hit's Ron?
what will the hat say? and dose the hat know who Merlin relay was?
will the power he know not, be Hermione help? maybe in the form of a Zat gun?
will the hogwarts years be gloss over, or are you planing to go in to minute by minute telling?
how fast will she find the Room of requirements?
what will this Hermione make of house elf's?
what will she do when she find out about harry home life?
i think that is enough questions for now! :)
looking forward to reading more of this soon.
nice chapter,
i hope to read more soon,
posting ever week would be nice. but it sound more like it will be ever 10 days?
well if Hermione and harry become friends will she let harry in and tell him about her true life?
how long before she hit's Ron?
what will the hat say? and dose the hat know who Merlin relay was?
will the power he know not, be Hermione help? maybe in the form of a Zat gun?
will the hogwarts years be gloss over, or are you planing to go in to minute by minute telling?
how fast will she find the Room of requirements?
what will this Hermione make of house elf's?
what will she do when she find out about harry home life?
i think that is enough questions for now! :)
looking forward to reading more of this soon.
3/20/2015 c1 Malix2
Interesting story, not many with Hermione as the main character for this crossover.
Interesting story, not many with Hermione as the main character for this crossover.
3/20/2015 c1 celf
wow,
a very good start.
and i am looking forward to reading more soon,
please dont drop this keep up the work and keep posting.
ps, at the end of the chapter i think some bits are missing the " " in them.
you have come up with a good story idea and let no-one tell you it not a good story idea, as it is a relay good story idea.
wow,
a very good start.
and i am looking forward to reading more soon,
please dont drop this keep up the work and keep posting.
ps, at the end of the chapter i think some bits are missing the " " in them.
you have come up with a good story idea and let no-one tell you it not a good story idea, as it is a relay good story idea.
3/20/2015 c1 Axeguest
nice intro so far hope you keep it up
nice intro so far hope you keep it up