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4/17/2015 c2 tamashiyuki
Be continued?
4/16/2015 c2 Silvermane1
Cool
4/14/2015 c2 Amonshy
Nice Story so far but hard to read. Even if you jump between Harry and Legolas from one paragraph to the next, you know how to make line so why not use them and make more paragraphs to make it esier to read? Apart from that you might go over the grammar (Sentences start with big letters and end with a point... no idea how to say that in English...). Oh and in the last paragraph you have a typo: you wrote ''luahged''
But nice story nevertheless. Hope for an update soon. :)
4/14/2015 c2 6LeArtemis 1234
Great chapter but there are some errors. I wouldn't mind being your Beta.
4/4/2015 c1 28Finn35
Are they actually going to be together physically at some point?
3/30/2015 c1 14elvesknightren
interesting concept, would love to see where it goes :)
3/21/2015 c1 TheBeauty
Nice beginning though it will be easier to read if there where dialogues in here :)

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