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you have no idea how right you are blake

9/26/2015 c23 Dragolord09
Besides Psychodriver and Time Diver, I really can't think of any more Banpresto Original-type abilities at this time, but I do have a question: will Weiss, Blake, and Yang get mecha-sized versions of their weapons considering Ruby now has a Guarlion-sized version of her sniper-scythe. Also, will you be adding in features from Original Generations or not?

9/25/2015 c23 silentstrixe
I've always loved Gilliam Yeager in SRW OG 1 & 2 for the GBA. He is actually one of my favorite characters. I have never been able to explain why though. I just love his character.

I really liked the meeting between him and Weiss a lot. I felt it was quite well written and kept to their characters, at least with how you have changed Weiss, quite well. This was especially true once I reminded myself that it truly is as Gilliam observed. Weiss isn't some super cold person with perfect control over herself who will be able to successfully keep all her secrets to herself, especially when pitted against someone with Gilliam's training and experience in intelligence control.

She truly would have to open up to someone eventually about her situation, and I feel that Gilliam is probably the best person that she could've opened up to first. Whether she will open up to others from here though before meeting back up with Blake and Yang though is another matter entirely. I don't see her doing so unless something happens that forces her to do so, and at that time I think Gilliam would probably back her up whether she decides to talk or not.

9/8/2015 c22 Dragolord09
I'll admit that at least one of these choices is a little beyond the scope of the SRW multiverse, but considering how many of these seemingly unconnected universes have crossovers, I figure it's a valid choice. Now as to Ruby's new power, is it:

A: Prana (Masou Kishin)
B: Aura (Dunbine)
C: Time Diver (Banpresto Original/SRW Original Generations)
D: Overskill (King Gainer)
E: Elemental Ability (Aquarion)
or F: Hamon (JoJo's Bizarre Adventures)?

9/8/2015 c22 silentstrixe
While I feel that the fight could have been more descriptive, I also realize that when you are dealing with two combatants who do things as quickly as Ruby and Masaki do it is hard to properly describe a battle that only lasts a few minutes without it screwing with a reader's sense of what the passage of time should have been with descriptions that take so long to read it messes up one's sense of belief.

Anyways, great work as usual. I would normally think that Shu actually giving Ruby the info that he himself has a similar power like her would be out of character, but at the same time I feel it could be explained that in his surprise and happiness at Ruby's draw with the Cybuster that he decided to give her a carrot so to speak in the form of that info.

9/5/2015 c21 MaxHD2490
Can't wait for the next chapter with Ruby vs Masaki.
The Valsion is a strong mecha with an energy field but Valsion Kai/Custom is a bit weaker while lacking the gravity wave attack which the Bian's Valsion has and worst part is the Valsion Custom is mass produced (they also don't have energy field but anti-beam field instead)

8/31/2015 c21 12SanguisAnima
... PLEASE let there be a speedster battle next chapter.

Just out of curiosity, I just can't help but ask... Have you ever thought of mapping out skillsets and seishin spells for the RWBY girls? (If only my microSD didn't die out on me along with practically everything I've written, I would've forwarded you the stuff I've mapped out - abilities and seishin spells included)

- Sanguis