for Huntresses of a Shattered Dimension7/31/2015 c17 MaxHD2490
Pretty good chapter with the action going on which makes up previous chapter. Liked the part with Weiss manage to disable the Guarlion.
Seems Gilliam started figure out Weiss is not from this universe along with Ruby, Yang, and Blake. But that might be awhile before he meets rwby team together.
Pretty good chapter with the action going on which makes up previous chapter. Liked the part with Weiss manage to disable the Guarlion.
Seems Gilliam started figure out Weiss is not from this universe along with Ruby, Yang, and Blake. But that might be awhile before he meets rwby team together.
7/31/2015 c17 silentstrixe
The only thing that is getting me about this chapter, and the rest of the story so far is the amount of shadowy entities that you are bringing in. I have lost track of whether the current one is new, or another you have already introduced. I'm finding it a little confusing, and am left wondering if they are all shadowy figures cannon to SRW/RWBY or if any of them are OCs you've made for your plot.
Besides that, I continue to greatly enjoy this fic and love it whenever I get that e-mail notification saying that there's a new chapter. Keep up the great work.
The only thing that is getting me about this chapter, and the rest of the story so far is the amount of shadowy entities that you are bringing in. I have lost track of whether the current one is new, or another you have already introduced. I'm finding it a little confusing, and am left wondering if they are all shadowy figures cannon to SRW/RWBY or if any of them are OCs you've made for your plot.
Besides that, I continue to greatly enjoy this fic and love it whenever I get that e-mail notification saying that there's a new chapter. Keep up the great work.
7/25/2015 c16 
7The Hotblooded Author
Its okay, but the lack of plot-advancing elements is going to hurt this fic...a lot.
7The Hotblooded AuthorIts okay, but the lack of plot-advancing elements is going to hurt this fic...a lot.
7/24/2015 c16 MaxHD2490
Chapter is pretty good, namely the part after the previous chapter with Ruby. The rest of the chapter is not to bad but looking forward what the next chapter has in store. Right now I don't mind the current character of Weiss with a split personilty.
Chapter is pretty good, namely the part after the previous chapter with Ruby. The rest of the chapter is not to bad but looking forward what the next chapter has in store. Right now I don't mind the current character of Weiss with a split personilty.
7/24/2015 c16 2GGFBank
Honestly? I don't really like the Eis and Will thing that much, aside from it make Weiss look strange, that Sympathia plot will not resolve that fast unless you have some twist ready in mind. Though it is interesting to see RWBY team react to more docile Weiss. lol
2GGFBankHonestly? I don't really like the Eis and Will thing that much, aside from it make Weiss look strange, that Sympathia plot will not resolve that fast unless you have some twist ready in mind. Though it is interesting to see RWBY team react to more docile Weiss. lol
7/21/2015 c15 MaxHD2490
Ruby's Guarlion while powered by her aura is pretty deadly when she destroyed the Aerogator bugs.
Kinda wonder what kind of a custom mecha for Yang? A customized Gespenst with Yang's signature weapons?
Ruby's Guarlion while powered by her aura is pretty deadly when she destroyed the Aerogator bugs.
Kinda wonder what kind of a custom mecha for Yang? A customized Gespenst with Yang's signature weapons?
7/19/2015 c15 Enemy Ace
Owww now you done it!
though now you are making me wish for the inevitable clash between Masaki and Ruby.
Though if we get there, the inspectors are going to have a fuuuuun time
Owww now you done it!
though now you are making me wish for the inevitable clash between Masaki and Ruby.
Though if we get there, the inspectors are going to have a fuuuuun time
7/16/2015 c15 7The Hotblooded Author
Great job. The action scene is so detailed that you could actually feel like you are witnessing this, but the lack of dialouge and character interaction does hurt a crossover that comes from a RPG-Strategy Sci-fi game, as Game Dev Tycoon showed us.
7The Hotblooded AuthorGreat job. The action scene is so detailed that you could actually feel like you are witnessing this, but the lack of dialouge and character interaction does hurt a crossover that comes from a RPG-Strategy Sci-fi game, as Game Dev Tycoon showed us.
7/16/2015 c15 silentstrixe
A large part of me was expecting this... And it was GLORIOUS! Good job, and keep up the great work. Through writer's block and all.
A large part of me was expecting this... And it was GLORIOUS! Good job, and keep up the great work. Through writer's block and all.
7/16/2015 c15 mega1987
foreshadowing OGG plotline there, bro...
can't wait for the plot to pick up pace.
foreshadowing OGG plotline there, bro...
can't wait for the plot to pick up pace.
7/16/2015 c15 2GGFBank
Bian is a genious. And I first think Ruby will blend in with Treue by showing her dork with weapon side. And I got Trans-AM instead! pretty cool though.
2GGFBankBian is a genious. And I first think Ruby will blend in with Treue by showing her dork with weapon side. And I got Trans-AM instead! pretty cool though.
7/7/2015 c14 GGFBank
Well, I'm a few among that reviewer and also have a stories myself so I understand your point.
I feel that many reader (including me) judge the story from number of review they have. Normally, my pick for new story is
-More than 100 review, that guarantee some good
-Only a few words, chapters but high enough review. Like getting 30 review for 1st chapter alone is quite a feat, at least the idea gonna be awesome.
-The summary is good, well idea of the fic that is. I think I read this fic because this reason
I really can't explain what I want to say but I feel that if you want more reader, you need to make the first part of the story more attractive.
Well, I'm a few among that reviewer and also have a stories myself so I understand your point.
I feel that many reader (including me) judge the story from number of review they have. Normally, my pick for new story is
-More than 100 review, that guarantee some good
-Only a few words, chapters but high enough review. Like getting 30 review for 1st chapter alone is quite a feat, at least the idea gonna be awesome.
-The summary is good, well idea of the fic that is. I think I read this fic because this reason
I really can't explain what I want to say but I feel that if you want more reader, you need to make the first part of the story more attractive.
7/6/2015 c14 7The Hotblooded Author
Thanks El! Already got an extra review! Morale increased by 3!
Current Morale: 103...
Is it just me or my will gains are worse than Ryoto?
Anyway great writing. Cant wait for the Ring cameo.
Ring: *looked at Blake's repainted Huckie 009 with a Chakram Launcher* B-But I thought my 008L is unique-looking...mou...
Blake: S-Sorry miss. If you like, I can paint it black and white...or give it a visor...*nudge nudge* Exbein *nudge*
Ring: I wanna be in 3rd OG with a Huckebein Kai...
7The Hotblooded AuthorThanks El! Already got an extra review! Morale increased by 3!
Current Morale: 103...
Is it just me or my will gains are worse than Ryoto?
Anyway great writing. Cant wait for the Ring cameo.
Ring: *looked at Blake's repainted Huckie 009 with a Chakram Launcher* B-But I thought my 008L is unique-looking...mou...
Blake: S-Sorry miss. If you like, I can paint it black and white...or give it a visor...*nudge nudge* Exbein *nudge*
Ring: I wanna be in 3rd OG with a Huckebein Kai...
6/26/2015 c13 The Hotblooded Author
Kinda short, but still good. I can see the effort put into this but...
...its kind of a let down.
Also shameless plug here READ MY FANFIC EVERYBODY!
Ok sorry.
Kinda short, but still good. I can see the effort put into this but...
...its kind of a let down.
Also shameless plug here READ MY FANFIC EVERYBODY!
Ok sorry.
6/12/2015 c12 mega1987
considering Ruby's the newcomer and her full capabilities as a MS/PT pilot is still unknown...
it makes sense she'll be piloting a non customized but high performance machine from the start...
I bet Bain and Shu, once gathered enough battle data from Ruby's fighting style then she'll get her own ace custom that fits her.
same with the rest of Team RWBY as they're all using at least mook units atm...
I'm expecting those 1st stage Ace custom for their own personal use will be finished before Operation:SRW or early during Neo-DC/shadow mirror outbreak.
considering Ruby's the newcomer and her full capabilities as a MS/PT pilot is still unknown...
it makes sense she'll be piloting a non customized but high performance machine from the start...
I bet Bain and Shu, once gathered enough battle data from Ruby's fighting style then she'll get her own ace custom that fits her.
same with the rest of Team RWBY as they're all using at least mook units atm...
I'm expecting those 1st stage Ace custom for their own personal use will be finished before Operation:SRW or early during Neo-DC/shadow mirror outbreak.