for The Difference One Man Can Make10/22/2024 c5 
6Primus2021
It would be funny, if they found a stowaway in their ship after reaching land, that's the way of course being the Stormborn Dragon Princess! Lol.
6Primus2021It would be funny, if they found a stowaway in their ship after reaching land, that's the way of course being the Stormborn Dragon Princess! Lol.
10/21/2024 c3 Primus2021
Well, first off, I hope the Raven gets killed, I really don't like the asshole.
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Second, I had a thought!
The brothers of the Night's watch wake up one morning to find a small, if foul smelling, box in their courtyard, with a note "To: Benjin Stark the Future First Ranger! From: Harry Potter the Future King Beyond the Wall (DO NOT HYPHENATE THIS TITLE)! I hope this finds you well and in good spirits, my friend." The Black Brothers get Benjin who opens the box, only to discover the severed head of Alfyn Crowkiller.
Lol.
Well, first off, I hope the Raven gets killed, I really don't like the asshole.
...
Second, I had a thought!
The brothers of the Night's watch wake up one morning to find a small, if foul smelling, box in their courtyard, with a note "To: Benjin Stark the Future First Ranger! From: Harry Potter the Future King Beyond the Wall (DO NOT HYPHENATE THIS TITLE)! I hope this finds you well and in good spirits, my friend." The Black Brothers get Benjin who opens the box, only to discover the severed head of Alfyn Crowkiller.
Lol.
10/6/2024 c3 vswey
lol, obviously this style is popular but i dont understand the joy of reading, or writing, pieces like this. Harry is just an uber powerful, undefeatable omnipotent mary sue. He even knows how to build a whole civilization!
lol, obviously this style is popular but i dont understand the joy of reading, or writing, pieces like this. Harry is just an uber powerful, undefeatable omnipotent mary sue. He even knows how to build a whole civilization!
10/6/2024 c2 vswey
your motivations for harry make no sense. he just got here, to a world he knows nothing about. he had a few, if that, conversations with 4 people of the watch and from that decided 'yes, the wildlings should be uplofted!'. lol, that carries so little narrative weight. should have spent a few chapters developing a reason why he should care. this is just bad.
your motivations for harry make no sense. he just got here, to a world he knows nothing about. he had a few, if that, conversations with 4 people of the watch and from that decided 'yes, the wildlings should be uplofted!'. lol, that carries so little narrative weight. should have spent a few chapters developing a reason why he should care. this is just bad.
7/19/2024 c2 Guest
The second you made Harry allow the crow to hold a blade to his neck, you lost me as a reader.
What can I expect from this literally godly wizard who will STILL lose to a common man when the plot requires it?
It's just not interesting.
The second you made Harry allow the crow to hold a blade to his neck, you lost me as a reader.
What can I expect from this literally godly wizard who will STILL lose to a common man when the plot requires it?
It's just not interesting.
7/17/2024 c23 emjuju
i love this story. Its the best crossover ive ever read. Please come back to us. I need to know how it ends. i need to read more.
i love this story. Its the best crossover ive ever read. Please come back to us. I need to know how it ends. i need to read more.
6/30/2024 c23 Stormzy
I hate seeing great works that haven't been updated in ages. Especially ones where the author gives no indication they're taking a break or going on hiatus for a bit. Just makes you assume the worst.
I hate seeing great works that haven't been updated in ages. Especially ones where the author gives no indication they're taking a break or going on hiatus for a bit. Just makes you assume the worst.
6/3/2024 c2 New Mate
Haha, dude, you write, "I don't like it when characters make a decision solely for the sake of the plot," but Harry's decision to join the Free People, even without seeing the rest of the world, sounds like it's just what the plot ordered.
Nonetheless, the second chapter is a whole lot better than the garbage dump of words in the first. Seems like the plot's flowing smoothly, at a slow pace, and it's kinda interesting. I'm a bit wary of Harry getting all these cheat Death gear when he's transported to this world, but I guess it's all fair game until he starts amassing a dragon army, finding a stash of a hundred magic eggs in some backwater spot. Hope, you will not ruin the story.
Haha, dude, you write, "I don't like it when characters make a decision solely for the sake of the plot," but Harry's decision to join the Free People, even without seeing the rest of the world, sounds like it's just what the plot ordered.
Nonetheless, the second chapter is a whole lot better than the garbage dump of words in the first. Seems like the plot's flowing smoothly, at a slow pace, and it's kinda interesting. I'm a bit wary of Harry getting all these cheat Death gear when he's transported to this world, but I guess it's all fair game until he starts amassing a dragon army, finding a stash of a hundred magic eggs in some backwater spot. Hope, you will not ruin the story.
6/3/2024 c1 New Mate
Hey, mate, this thing's a whopping 7,000 words! Are you sure we need that much for a prologue/chapter 1? Not saying the story's bad or anything from the get-go. It's just, after the first thousand words, it got a bit tedious. I mean, do I really need all this info about this alternate Harry world if he's just gonna end up in another world in the next chapter? How much of this text is gonna matter down the line? Maybe we should just scrap this chapter altogether and sprinkle in flashbacks when they actually matter during the "questing" in "Game of Thrones"? Honestly, I couldn't quite sink my teeth into this chapter. From the whole word barrage, all I caught was it's an alternate Harry, basically an original character in his name, and he's sort of a decent wizard. Then there's a scuffle, an explosion, and bam, new world!)))
Hey, mate, this thing's a whopping 7,000 words! Are you sure we need that much for a prologue/chapter 1? Not saying the story's bad or anything from the get-go. It's just, after the first thousand words, it got a bit tedious. I mean, do I really need all this info about this alternate Harry world if he's just gonna end up in another world in the next chapter? How much of this text is gonna matter down the line? Maybe we should just scrap this chapter altogether and sprinkle in flashbacks when they actually matter during the "questing" in "Game of Thrones"? Honestly, I couldn't quite sink my teeth into this chapter. From the whole word barrage, all I caught was it's an alternate Harry, basically an original character in his name, and he's sort of a decent wizard. Then there's a scuffle, an explosion, and bam, new world!)))
6/4/2024 c23 Wrixel
Thank you for your story. It is very easy to read and very captivating. Your blend of Harry Potter and GoT is briliant.
Thank you for your story. It is very easy to read and very captivating. Your blend of Harry Potter and GoT is briliant.
5/12/2024 c14 Q
Wow so you just completely beefed up the opposition to the point where every one of them is on par with or stronger than Harry... that's not even mentioning the Night King. I was really enjoying this story but it seems the ending will be convoluted garbage like this. Goodbye.
Wow so you just completely beefed up the opposition to the point where every one of them is on par with or stronger than Harry... that's not even mentioning the Night King. I was really enjoying this story but it seems the ending will be convoluted garbage like this. Goodbye.