
3/22/2015 c1 qwertypous
awesome! is it possible for harry to become more younger when he arrived in gof universe? please do a cersei and harry pairing.. you know it would be awesome during robert rebellion they both meet and fall in loved and because of some reasons cersei need to leave harry and then years later cersei would be surprise to meet harry again in the north and the romance would start again (but jamie still would be the father of cersei children ).. hehe.. oh by the way i think this is also good story if you not make it a crossover story you can just continue harry life after he return to his homeland.
awesome! is it possible for harry to become more younger when he arrived in gof universe? please do a cersei and harry pairing.. you know it would be awesome during robert rebellion they both meet and fall in loved and because of some reasons cersei need to leave harry and then years later cersei would be surprise to meet harry again in the north and the romance would start again (but jamie still would be the father of cersei children ).. hehe.. oh by the way i think this is also good story if you not make it a crossover story you can just continue harry life after he return to his homeland.
3/22/2015 c1 Guest
Very good
Very good
3/22/2015 c1 coolgirl
Nice, I can't wait to see more of this. I am assume that you are going to write on prompt 12( hopefully) or 2.
Nice, I can't wait to see more of this. I am assume that you are going to write on prompt 12( hopefully) or 2.
3/22/2015 c1 guest
Like it. There is a glaring lack of good asoiaf hp crossover. Hope u make it an empire building story so Harry takes over. Like the start of the timeline as it gives time for Harry to build so he can make a substantial impact. And that u continue to finish it.
Like it. There is a glaring lack of good asoiaf hp crossover. Hope u make it an empire building story so Harry takes over. Like the start of the timeline as it gives time for Harry to build so he can make a substantial impact. And that u continue to finish it.
3/22/2015 c1
1FarceFox
I think that you set up the story quite well, enough information on the Harry Potter side of things without feeling too much like an info-dump. It would be cool if you have Harry south of the wall and influencing the rebellion, but I will read either way. I am looking forward to your next chapter.

I think that you set up the story quite well, enough information on the Harry Potter side of things without feeling too much like an info-dump. It would be cool if you have Harry south of the wall and influencing the rebellion, but I will read either way. I am looking forward to your next chapter.
3/22/2015 c1 ficreader2011
hope harry doesn't bow down to anyone in westeros AND ACTUALLY USES HIS MAGIC unlike other harry in westeros 't wait for update
hope harry doesn't bow down to anyone in westeros AND ACTUALLY USES HIS MAGIC unlike other harry in westeros 't wait for update
3/22/2015 c1 Mandolarian Knight
Great start, I enjoyed the differences you took from the normal Harry Potter fanfiction. I really interested in seeing where you are going with this story and hope to read the next chapter soon enough. I didn't see much in the way of grammar and structure errors. Nice flow through the chapter, though the parts where you described Harry's journey felt a little rushed.
Great start, I enjoyed the differences you took from the normal Harry Potter fanfiction. I really interested in seeing where you are going with this story and hope to read the next chapter soon enough. I didn't see much in the way of grammar and structure errors. Nice flow through the chapter, though the parts where you described Harry's journey felt a little rushed.
3/22/2015 c1
5Infernus est in animo
You know, i was really tempted to scroll straight down and write "first review", but i felt it might not do the story justice and DAMN was i right A's across the board man, really well done. I hope to see more soon, although i have finished reading it only 40 minutes after it came out.

You know, i was really tempted to scroll straight down and write "first review", but i felt it might not do the story justice and DAMN was i right A's across the board man, really well done. I hope to see more soon, although i have finished reading it only 40 minutes after it came out.